On the Beach
Free verse using the given words.6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely poem! I guess I missed it because it was for a contest. You did a great job creating a feeling of healing of the soul by connecting with the great big ocean.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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What a lovely poem! I guess I missed it because it was for a contest. You did a great job creating a feeling of healing of the soul by connecting with the great big ocean.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for finding it and reviewing.
Comment from royowen
I think you've integrated these words beautifully, the skill lies in tying one's consciousness to the weaving of words in this narrative, you've written a wonderfully knitted poem, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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I think you've integrated these words beautifully, the skill lies in tying one's consciousness to the weaving of words in this narrative, you've written a wonderfully knitted poem, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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thank you very much.
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Well done
Comment from Wendy G
A compelling poem about one being called by the sea to finish with his/her life. The photograph indicates loneliness, isolation and despair. The mind can be deceptive, as can the hypnotic waves. Thought-provoking. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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A compelling poem about one being called by the sea to finish with his/her life. The photograph indicates loneliness, isolation and despair. The mind can be deceptive, as can the hypnotic waves. Thought-provoking. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fine work in the form--seamless incorporation of the requisite words--poems with such constraints often seem forced. Startling imagery--heaving sea--honor's death.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Fine work in the form--seamless incorporation of the requisite words--poems with such constraints often seem forced. Startling imagery--heaving sea--honor's death.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for this thoughtful review.
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
A good feeling poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it.
I almost want to go touch a wave right now. The flow was nice and not always easy to do using random words.
Great job!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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A good feeling poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it.
I almost want to go touch a wave right now. The flow was nice and not always easy to do using random words.
Great job!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem fits the contest requirements.
It is artfully structured and poignantly emotive.
It is visually attractive and the photo endorses the theme.
Thank you for sharing
All the best at the booths
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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This poem fits the contest requirements.
It is artfully structured and poignantly emotive.
It is visually attractive and the photo endorses the theme.
Thank you for sharing
All the best at the booths
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for these lovely stars .I am honoured that you liked this very much.
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It stands out my Friend. 👌😊🌹👀
