Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem seems to be ekprhastic, inspired by or written about the artwork. I like the personification in line one and the inference of eternity in the last.
Congrats on placint second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Hi Joan,

Oh, thank you for your amazing thoughts and for sharing them with me - and for the congratulations! I appreciate such a good review, on my work. :-)

Senyai

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Hi Joan,

Oh, thank you for your amazing thoughts and for sharing them with me - and for the congratulations! I appreciate such a good review, on my work. :-)

Senyai

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Senyai.

Your poem "shows," not tells a view in "time and space." it certainly conforms to the style and standard of a Lune poem. Well done and good luck in the contest.

Robert

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021

Hi Robert,

Thank you for your super review and thoughts. Always means so much to hear from you. Stay happy and healthy.

Have a great weekend and coming week,
Senyai

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 10-Jul-2021

You're very welcome.

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

I call that a cotton candy sunset! Look at those colors!! Now, how sweet is this little write of yours! Loving the mood and that perfect image!! well done :-)))

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021

Hi Susan,

Oh thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts on my little Lune poem.
Your super review is greatly appreciated. Cotton candy sunset, love it!

Have a great weekend,
Senyai

Comment from MAMONIA

Exceptional

Oh my, what a beautiful sight! I love the photo, and the words create more beauty for this image. You did a find work here for the lune poetry contest.
This poem is certainly a contender.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Marie,
Thank you so much for such a lovely and inspiring review of my little Lune poem! I appreciate your time to share your thoughts on my work. It means so much to connect with other writers and learn from them.

Thank you truly for the gift of six little stars! Glad this poem spoke to you, Marie. You have made my day :-)

Have a great weekend and coming week,
Senyai

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

"Twilight falls with grace
soft purple
hues in time and space"
Beautiful picture and beautiful words you have used to describe it. Twilight is the nicest part o the day.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Anne,

Oh yes, I love twilight too. It is a magical mystical time. Seshadri said it best :-)

Your thoughts on my little Lune poem means so much, connecting to all the writers on FanStory and learning new poetry forms is very helpful and one of those I learn from is you, Anne. Thank you!

Have a great weekend and coming week,
Senyai

reply by Anne Johnston on 09-Jul-2021

You are welcome

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

:-)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Senyai!
Such beautiful imagery is to be found in you well-executed lune presentation.
I so appreciate the time of day of which you write and how you characterize it as falling with "grace." I have often referred to it as a "time of gathering in."
Beautiful imagery.

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Diane,

Your words are better than my short Lune poem :-) Yes, I love twilight and the "time of gathering in." A perfect phrase as the day closes and prepares for night. People gather to return home, birds and animals nest and let the night fall around them in its silent protection.

Love sharing with you as you are one I learn from here on FanStory.

Have a great weekend and coming week!
Senyai

Comment from estory

Excellent

The balance was great, the nature image was great, and this had a great oriental feel to it. The echoing effects of the rhyme of grace and space was strong and reverberating. What I liked about it was that you created this Garden of Eden space, this tranquil innocent moment in the middle of the chaos of life and the movements of life. estory

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi EStory,

So good to hear from you! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on my little Lune poem. Your review was far better than my poem :-)

I love twilight too, and to feel the earth preparing for night -everyone hurrying home along with birds nesting and the sunsets ... oh the beautiful sunsets! Thank you for a most lovely review.

Always,

Senyai

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi EStory,

So good to hear from you! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on my little Lune poem. Your review was far better than my poem :-)

I love twilight too, and to feel the earth preparing for night -everyone hurrying home along with birds nesting and the sunsets ... oh the beautiful sunsets! Thank you for a most lovely review.

Always,

Senyai

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Oh, this is beautiful, in such a few words it is colourful, tuneful and effortlessly poetic. I love it and hope it does very well in the contest as it and you deserve very best wishes and well done Meia x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Meia,

Thank you kindly for your beautiful review of my little Lune poem. I appreciate your time to read and assess my work. Thank you for sharing with me and for the well wishes too :-)

Have a great weekend and coming week!
Senyai

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Meia,

Thank you kindly for your beautiful review of my little Lune poem. I appreciate your time to read and assess my work. Thank you for sharing with me and for the well wishes too :-)

Have a great weekend and coming week!
Senyai

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, what a beautiful tribute to sunset, and thank you for explaining "Matahari Terbenam". Excellent imagery and visuals and I love your artwork.

Good luck in the contest, it should do very well.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Eternal Muse,

I loved your review and sharing your lovely thoughts on my little Lune poem. Also many thanks for the well wishes :-)

Have a great weekend and coming week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Eternal Muse,

I loved your review and sharing your lovely thoughts on my little Lune poem. Also many thanks for the well wishes :-)

Have a great weekend and coming week,
Senyai

Comment from amahra

Excellent

First, I must say the photography you chose to compliment your writing is stunning. Your Lune Poem is very meaningful and beautiful. It's a very unique poetic style and you did a great job.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Amahra,

Your kind words made my day a little brighter so thank you so very much. I am delighted you like my little Lune poem. The photo was a beautiful one indeed.

Have a great weekend and coming week!
Senyai

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021

Hi Amahra,

Your kind words made my day a little brighter so thank you so very much. I am delighted you like my little Lune poem. The photo was a beautiful one indeed.

Have a great weekend and coming week!
Senyai