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Happy birthday Miah...

A lullaby - Miah's 9th birthday.

52 total reviews 
Comment from Janetsue
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My grandson will be nine next January. I wish him all the same wonderful things you have placed into this excellent poem. Kids grow up too fast, it seems, and strong guidance is a must. Yours are very fortunate to have you as their father and grandfather! :-)

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Janet, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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What a handsome young man full of the light and promise of Christ. How very blessed he is and your family! A fine tribute for your grandson. Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks Sally, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from amahra
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I really love this poem. It speaks loudly of The Father's love and steadfastness to His Word. I love your choice of words and it is beautifully written. Great job!

He will ever walk beside you,
through the conflict, storms and tears
He will calm the tempest brewing,
wipe away all doubt and fears. (my favorite staza)

His word, right arm be your stay. (my favorite line)

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks Amahra, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a wonderful tribute to your granddaughter Roy, she is certainly well cared for by her family and God is watching over her too, a beautifully written poem from the heart, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks Dolly. for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jay Squires
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Oh, my goodness, Roy. Your poem took my breath away. Happy, gentle Miah. He's too busy being a child to know what a rock of loving, knowing, support he has in his grandpa. Please, if you haven't done it already, Keep these poems, these treasures, separate for each child... and present him or her with them, bound by a ribbon and your love when they are of an age to appreciate their beauty and truth. They don't know what a fount of boundless love and wisdom that connects them by blood to you, and by Blood to Christ.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much Jay, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Lovely tribute to a beloved grandson unusual name--pronounced MY-ah? (vs girl's name Mia=MEE-ah) Stong imagery, elegant phrasing and flawless flow. Happy Day!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much Liz, for these lovely comments and review, (yes it?s Myah) blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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It's lovely getting to know all your grandchildren through your lovely poems, Roy, and this one of your dear, (most handsome) grandson, Miah, is lovely. I'm sure he will all treasure this unique birthday gift forever. Your family are lovely and very lucky to have a dad and grandfather like you. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks Sandra, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from papa55mike
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A loving tribute to a terrific grandson. I see he's a soccer fan. I miss going to a baseball game. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much Mike, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
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What a beautiful poem to celebrate the birth of the gentle young men. I love all of God's promises you've given him so that he will know is future is secure in God's hands. I know you are thankful for all of your grandchildren. God is blessing you and them.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much Beth, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carlos' girl
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Wow what a beautiful poem. I love the way you wove scripture into the verses. Of course the image and the authors notes provide the perfect background. Very nice read

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much CG, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Carlos' girl on 13-Jun-2021
    Youre welcome. Have a good one