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Happy birthday Miah...

A lullaby - Miah's 9th birthday.

52 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice photo and a
good looking young man, Roy.
-Hope he has a special
9th birthday.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show how he will be looked
after "through the conflict, storms
and tears," and "song and care"
will help with that, too.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Pam, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jun-2021
    You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Dear Roy,
Happy Birthday to Mia.
Roy, this is an exceptional birthday wish to your grandson, and a lesson for all of us.
God's love for all of us is vast.
I hope this wonderful poem reaches a lot of people and makes them feel as special as your grandson should feel.
Blessings, Roy.
Good luck in the contest, and
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Cindy, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 15-Jun-2021
    You?re welcome, Roy.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your tribute to Miah, his birthday, and his future with God beside him, Roy. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this 'card.' Your words are heartfelt with great descriptions and promises. I can feel the love and admiration you have for him, and that which God had for him before he was born.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Jan, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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What a wonderful poem for your grandson, he'll probably read this years from now and understand what a talented and loving grandparent he has. Thank you for sharing this part of your life. :)

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ginnygray
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Roy, what a great tribute to a very beloved Grandson celebrating his 9th birthday June 16th. He is a handsome young man with a very talented Granddad! I'm partial to the third and fourth stanzas; "God will ever walk beside you," wipe away all doubt and fears," "ride on wings of promise," "truth will be your purpose," and "His word, right arm be your stay," are just eloquent words of description! Happy Birthday, Miah!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Ginny, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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Happy Birthday, Miah!! My middle grandchild will also be 9 this month. How fun! I love your blessings poured on to Miah in your poem and I agree with you in prayer, may the Lord's Truth be Miah's purpose and may God's Right Arm and His Word be Miah's stay.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks again Helen, , for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lisa Marcelina
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I wish Miah a very happy 9th birthday. May God bless him and continue to bring his parents, and grandparents joy.

I think this poem is a wonderful way of expressing your love for him and something he can keep for years to come.

Blessings,
Lisa

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks again Lisa, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Roy,
I'm touched by the lovely words you used for your Birthday thoughts. I smiled to see a wonderful picture of your grand son saying God walk beside you and God will lead your grand on the right Path.
Gert

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Gert, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Jun-2021
    You are most welcome Roy
    Gert
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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In this excellent, reverent poem, you have passed promises along to this precious little loved one--sure and sound promises, because they came from God.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks again Janice, , for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
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What a tribute to such a handsome young man from his wonderful grandfather. Someday, I hope he recognizes how special you are and the faith you have and offer them about our dear Lord. I know you shall teach them, and they will recognize the goodness.

Happy Birthday to Miah, and may God bless him with many more. Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Carol, for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy