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Happy birthday Miah...

A lullaby - Miah's 9th birthday.

52 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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What a beautiful poem and blessing for him on his birthday. What a wonderful thing it is for them to know the security they have in Jesus, and His presence with them day by day. Well written Roy. They are indeed blessed that you are their grandfather. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Wendy, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a beautifully written poem for your grandson. It has s nice flow and rhyme. Nice overall presentation as well. Handsome little grandson you have there. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Joanne, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
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What a beautiful gift to give your grandchild .Your poem gives him faith and strength to carry on undaunted since at every step He will be with him.This is the best gift you can give your grandchild .May God bless you and your family.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Sanku, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Judy Lawless
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You always write such beautiful poems for your family and friends on their birthdays, Roy. This one that honours your grandson Miah is one that I'm sure he will hold dear for years to come.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Judy. for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from LisaMay
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Miah is a lucky boy to be raised in such a faith-based family with song and care to mark his way... and to have such a gifted granddad as you, Roy! This is a delightful lullaby.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thank you Jenny, bless you
Comment from forestport12
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What a great scripture Zephaniah 3:17. I needed to read it. I always count on your poems to center me and bring me back into spiritual focus. What a stellar poem to give foundation to the young one.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks so much, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Raul1
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This is a good dedication to your son. It sounds like he is the person who puts all your doubts away. It is a very nice poem. Well written. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Raul, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by Raul1 on 14-Jun-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from Sankey
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What a beautiful picture of your Grandson. Sound like he knows the Lord as well Praise God for that. Thanks for sharing and I hope your Grandson loves Pappy's poem written for him.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Geoff, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
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Great picture, and I do love that scarf. What a delightful boy. He is sure to have a wonderful future ahead of him, and as you write, he is in God's care and God will ease any of his pains. It's so wonderful when children get such a good start in life. Excellent wording and the lines flow smoothly. judi

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Judy, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Happy Birthday, Miah....", is an extremely well written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
    Thanks Duchess, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 14-Jun-2021

    Dear Roy, You certainly deserved both.
    Bless you, the Duchess