Waltzing In Her Dreams
Was it a memory or a dream?25 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, That was so beautiful, Carol! My eyes welled up and I had a lump in my throat. That is how I believe it will be. I'd better not be wrong. I loved this one, my friend, you are an amazing story teller. Warm hugs, and big smiles. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Aww, That was so beautiful, Carol! My eyes welled up and I had a lump in my throat. That is how I believe it will be. I'd better not be wrong. I loved this one, my friend, you are an amazing story teller. Warm hugs, and big smiles. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Between Michael and Mike, my mind has been walking a few sad paths the last few days, but I am good or at least headed that way. Can't seem to get the writing mode going on the story, but it too will come. I pray that it will be like the story says and he will come to escort me home and everyone one will be waiting. Glad you enjoyed it. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sharon Davis
This story is told from an interesting perspective- memory or dream?
The reader journeys with Naomi as she travels through the story.
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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This story is told from an interesting perspective- memory or dream?
The reader journeys with Naomi as she travels through the story.
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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thank you Sharon for stopping by to read my short story... Thoughts of my husband rattled around my brain and I guess the story is what developed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Ack. Well, it's obvious where your thoughts are right now. But, no! Come back to us. Down here. WE need you, too.
This was sweet and tender and romantic, but unrealistic. We want Carol on the earth writing her novels. So. Back to work, girl. Come on. Shake it off. Or at least, try?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Carol,
Ack. Well, it's obvious where your thoughts are right now. But, no! Come back to us. Down here. WE need you, too.
This was sweet and tender and romantic, but unrealistic. We want Carol on the earth writing her novels. So. Back to work, girl. Come on. Shake it off. Or at least, try?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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It's been a troublesome few days, but never fear I will work through it and find my way again. It's just a road I travel... Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Seems like she did find her beloved and both have entered into Eternity together. I liked that your ending said it was just the beginning. Enjoyed your romance fiction.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Seems like she did find her beloved and both have entered into Eternity together. I liked that your ending said it was just the beginning. Enjoyed your romance fiction.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2021
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Thanks Helen for enjoying this short story. I guess my honey was rattling some memories and this is what I wrote. Glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a weird, but a weird good story that ends with a happy ending love after death forever and ever. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your wirings.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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What a weird, but a weird good story that ends with a happy ending love after death forever and ever. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your wirings.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Can't tell you exactly where this came from, Iza. My husband was strolling through my thoughts and this story formed from it. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
OMG!!! This is so tender and beautiful. It's real Naomi. It's just the beginning. Warmth, emotion, desire, disappointment, fulfillment and love are all wrapped up in this delightful short story, written by a truly talented writer.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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OMG!!! This is so tender and beautiful. It's real Naomi. It's just the beginning. Warmth, emotion, desire, disappointment, fulfillment and love are all wrapped up in this delightful short story, written by a truly talented writer.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Lorraine... I am blessed by your thoughtfulness and awesome words. Mike was strolling through my thoughts yesterday and I was missing him and I guess this story is what came out of it. I too loved it! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Aw, ain't that sweet. Off to eternity together. I would have probably been singing that old country song, "Prop me up beside the jukebox." I don't remember the exact words but, I think they sort of went like: Prop me up beside the jukebox when I die. I want to go to Heaven, but I don't want to go tonight. So, fill my boots up with sand, put a stiff drink in my hand..." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Aw, ain't that sweet. Off to eternity together. I would have probably been singing that old country song, "Prop me up beside the jukebox." I don't remember the exact words but, I think they sort of went like: Prop me up beside the jukebox when I die. I want to go to Heaven, but I don't want to go tonight. So, fill my boots up with sand, put a stiff drink in my hand..." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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EXACTLY! Are you sure you weren't a secret brother of Mike's? You two are so much alike, it actually scares me sometimes when you say some of the stuff you do. I love it and I can't help but laugh, but it sounds exactly like something he would mutter to me. He use to tell me to throw him in the dumpster or out back in the river...Yuck! I'm not stinking up my backyard with someone's dead (you now what). Laughing my self silly...Smiles, Carol
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My dad and I were sitting around one Sunday afternoon talking about how we hate funerals. So, we agreed to be cremated. His wife asked, "and what do you want us to do with the ashes." We both laughed and said at the same time, "Who gives sh...! We'll be dead. Do anything you want with the damn ashes." And thankfully the ashes don't stink. But be careful, when the wind gets a hold of those them, they'll about put your eyes out and choke you to death. LOL.
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My luck I would be saying something, a gust of wind would come and I would swallow someone's parts... LOL
And if you Mike's relative... don't go there or I will have to wash your mouth out. LOL
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LOL. The best part is: you wouldn't know which part they were.
Comment from eliz100
This is a very interesting story. It was a little mysterious for me. But sometimes that is cool. I do not see any room for improvement. The picture absolutely matches the story.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is a very interesting story. It was a little mysterious for me. But sometimes that is cool. I do not see any room for improvement. The picture absolutely matches the story.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I guess my husband's memories were rattling around my head and heart yesterday and this story is what came from it. I miss him so much and hope that someday we will be together in God's world. Smiles, Carol
Comment from amada
I love this, I just love this...I love the illusion of that man at the beach, the music, the waves. Your lines took mee back to a part of my past...oh, that charming prince...Each one of your lines spoke to my hear. This work is lovely...
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I love this, I just love this...I love the illusion of that man at the beach, the music, the waves. Your lines took mee back to a part of my past...oh, that charming prince...Each one of your lines spoke to my hear. This work is lovely...
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I too felt like my husband (he has passed) was speaking to me yesterday. Memories and thoughts produced this story. I am glad that it touched you and I am grateful for the review and the stars. Sending you smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Was it a memory or a dream?
Waltzing In Her Dreams
Begin Again
While was reading your romantic. I wished it was real not a ream.
All through your mystical dream, smiles when you said in the end of dream. Made me weep a bit made Smile when--
Naomi's spirit ascended into heaven with her beloved stranger at her side. At last, it was not the end, but just the beginning.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Was it a memory or a dream?
Waltzing In Her Dreams
Begin Again
While was reading your romantic. I wished it was real not a ream.
All through your mystical dream, smiles when you said in the end of dream. Made me weep a bit made Smile when--
Naomi's spirit ascended into heaven with her beloved stranger at her side. At last, it was not the end, but just the beginning.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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thank you, Gert. I guess thoughts of my husband were spinning around in my head yesterday and this story unfolded. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and I am grateful for the shiny stars. I wished it was real as well. I miss him so much. Thanks again - Carol
