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Night Birds Sing

Possibilities for my personal growth

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Comment from zanya
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This is both an interesting and inspiring narrative telling of the joys of the natural world and the peace they bring together with some health challenges along the way - wishing you good health

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
    Thank you, Zanya, for your insightful and encouraging review. I appreciate your wish for my good health. Nature and all of its wonders help me to grow both emotionally and physically. I am inspired by nature and use it to give me the strength to gain a new perspective on my life. Thank you for seeing the connection between the two.
    Have a great evening,
    Jesse
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Lovely and heartfelt piece--your poetry toolkit continues to serve you well--you seamlessly segued to prose despite some trepidation.

tule=>tulle clouds

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
    Thank you, Liz, for this helpful and encouraging review. I appreciate your suggestion to look up the definition of tule fog and see if the correction needs to be made. Thank you for noticing and commenting on my poetry to prose achievement. I am glad you like it.
    Thank you also for your kind words.
    Have a great evening,
    Jesse
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 05-Jun-2021
    I assume you mean tulle as in veil n
    netting material vs
    tule=
    a large bulrush that is abundant in marshy areas of California.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
    No, I looked it up. When referring to fog, it is spelled tule fog.
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 06-Jun-2021
    Cool!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
    Okay...yes, it is cool!
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 07-Jun-2021
    Funny that I assumed you were using the adjective tulle as a figure of speech to describe "gauzy" fog--never occurred to me there is an expression "tule fog."
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
    Yep, I live in California, and that is what we call a certain kind of low-lying fog. It is a legitimate word in at least two dictionaries on Google.
    Have a nice day,
    Jesse