Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is a cute story for the fifty words contest. Your illustration pairs well and sets the stage for your words. I know my grandson, age seven, would laugh at this and it gave me a chuckle. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

I hope when my grandchildren get home from school I can read it to them (better yet, they can read it to me) and we can laugh. I appreciate your kind review. Have a great day!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, in the animal world I think this was a sorry! This is a fun write and I enjoyed your humour here and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Thanks Dolly. I hope to read this to my grandchildren (better yet, they can read it to me) when they get home from school. Have a great day!