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Enraged Jealousy

Jealousy contest entry.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A good psychological study on jealousy. You brought out well the unhealthy nature of this emotion. You are right - a person obsessed with jealousy cannot stand anyone better than him - jealously blinds his/her mind.

Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-May-2021


reply by the author on 31-May-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Eternal Muse on 31-May-2021
    welcome
Comment from kahpot
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Yes jealousy does stem from the accomplishments of others and the wish for more attention on themselves, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 31-May-2021


reply by the author on 31-May-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, I would not like to meet this person. This is very well crafted contest entry.

Note:
He may have common sense, but strong emotions can overwhelm that in people.

A man who fights
to be best than her,

- I would recommend rewriting this part

 Comment Written 31-May-2021


reply by the author on 31-May-2021
    Thank you!