Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this information about the Lion's Mane Mushrooms. I had never heard of them before. They are interesting. Congratulations on your second place win.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Thank you so much, Anne. I appreciate your lovely review and kind thoughts!

Senyai

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2021

Thank you so much, Anne. I appreciate your lovely review and kind thoughts!

Senyai

reply by Anne Johnston on 03-Jun-2021

You are welcome

Comment from VJWild

Excellent

How is it that you managed to write a serious, yet silly haiku all at the same time? I love the words, then I really looked at the picture and giggled. Love it!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021

Thank you VJWild,

Such a lovely review and interesting thoughts! I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Fantastic 15 syllables poem. The poem expresses very few words but says a lot in its meaning. I liked the image that you chose for your writing. It is quite appropriate. Great job!

 Comment Written 31-May-2021

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reply by the author on 31-May-2021

Thank you, Amahra

Your insightful review and interesting thoughts made my day!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifteen-syllable poem, Lion's Pride, has the required syllable count and notes a couple of requirements to get a good mushroom going. This one is a hairy one for sure.

 Comment Written 30-May-2021

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reply by the author on 31-May-2021

Hi Bill.

Thanks for the thoughtful and humorous review. I enjoyed it very much :-)

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This 15 syllable poem uses each one well to introduce the reader to the Lion's Mane mushroom.

The descriptive language...prideful fits well with the accompanying image.

Nicely done.

 Comment Written 30-May-2021

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reply by the author on 31-May-2021

Hi Sharon,

Thanks for the lovely review and kind words on my work.

All the best

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I have never heard of these mushrooms!I enjoyed this presentation with your picture, your writing and your author notes. It is well done! Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks so much!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Lion's Mane Mushrooms are treasures
Lion's Pride


Nice entry for the 15 Syllables writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and imagery of the mushroom and the intermittent sun.

I would add a dash.

Intermittent sun --

Rain and Clouds nourish

This prideful mushroom

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Hi,

Thanks for your astute review. It is appreciated.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Unusual cloice of theme--stunning pic--intriguing notes enrichen the piece--sugg expanding on this magnificent mushroom in a prose post--a brief poem doesn't do it justice. That said, well done.

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Oh thank you for such a lovely review. It is much appreciated!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks so much for a lovely review and kind words!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I like this very short one because it whets the appetite, by words and image, to know more, which is then explained in the notes. It is fresh and original and informative. Well done. Best wishes for this entry.

 Comment Written 29-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks, I appreciate your lovely review and kind words on my entry.