Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Lighted hearts, is this a real thing they have in Bristol? The poem seems point to this.

The third and forth lines I'm not so sure about. I suppose van dream of finding love.

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks for your kind words
Jordan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is short, articulate, declares the whole tome of books in its content, and is sweetly rhythmic, rhymed and most imaginative and creative. Well done, great post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks again
Best
Jordan

reply by royowen on 30-May-2021

Bless you

Comment from ESOSTINE

Exceptional

Dear Aurapro, I read the poem over and over trying to place my own punctuations to help me make some meaning out of it. Consider adding punctuations to ease understanding of the poem. The poem gave an impression of some one who was so excited having found new true love that inspired hope with answered dreams and peace of mind. I could visualize the feeling of fulfilment in the new relationship. Thanks for sharing your world.

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thank you so much for the 6 stars
All the Best
Jordan

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I found this a little difficult to follow, but the unusual juxtaposition of words does create an interesting atmosphere. The mention of 'bristol' had me guessing.

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks for your kind words
Best
Jordan

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Heart's Serene, gives affirmation of all we seek in a relationship and all we can ever hope to receive while we are alive.

 Comment Written 28-May-2021

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reply by the author on 30-May-2021

Thanks for your kind words
Best
Jordan