Three Angels
The love and joy they brought15 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
This should be a six it is powerful lesson for all because hand caps can be taught to persevere and live among as as afunctinfpg person. I worked at Sunland in Orlando back in the day. I made so much different in their live it made me proud to be a part of their short lives.
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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This should be a six it is powerful lesson for all because hand caps can be taught to persevere and live among as as afunctinfpg person. I worked at Sunland in Orlando back in the day. I made so much different in their live it made me proud to be a part of their short lives.
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Hello my country cousin, thanks so much for reading. I had a lot to put up with re the other employees that had no understanding for the angels. Blessings, Kay. xx
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Comment from aryr
Good luck in the True Story Contest, Kace. This was remarkable. It showed your interest in Joey, Patty and Richard. You went the extra mile for them. I like your determination, especially after your accident. This story as well as what you have done is truly a testimony of your life. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Good luck in the True Story Contest, Kace. This was remarkable. It showed your interest in Joey, Patty and Richard. You went the extra mile for them. I like your determination, especially after your accident. This story as well as what you have done is truly a testimony of your life. Well done.
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Hello Alie, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. It was a very special time in my journey. I will never forget the angels. Love, K xx
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You are so welcome Kace, there are specific people I remember but that's what makes us great nurses, isn't it?
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very heart-warming story about your angels. But, equally important, your references to the staff show how jaded people can become toward others with severe disabilities. Very few people have the love and commitment required for successful relationships. I was so sorry to read about your accident and amputation.
I noticed a few writing things:
You are missing some paragraph breaks
Next was Patty, so much love she bowled me over every time I turned up for work she took my hand and led me to our little room. -- run-on sentence
Wednesdays was cooking day. ==> Wednesday
24 seater ==> 24-seater
Those years at the workshop were the best times, the three angels gave me love, made me feel special and I will never forget them. -- run-on sentence
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reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This is a very heart-warming story about your angels. But, equally important, your references to the staff show how jaded people can become toward others with severe disabilities. Very few people have the love and commitment required for successful relationships. I was so sorry to read about your accident and amputation.
I noticed a few writing things:
You are missing some paragraph breaks
Next was Patty, so much love she bowled me over every time I turned up for work she took my hand and led me to our little room. -- run-on sentence
Wednesdays was cooking day. ==> Wednesday
24 seater ==> 24-seater
Those years at the workshop were the best times, the three angels gave me love, made me feel special and I will never forget them. -- run-on sentence
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Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Thank you Susan. I will make edits. Glad you enjoyed. Love, Kay xx
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely story. I think the key was that you looked inside, and tried to find ways to make their lives more interesting and fruitful and satisfying. How devastating that your accident cut that time short. You would have been wonderful in that role. Well written.
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reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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What a lovely story. I think the key was that you looked inside, and tried to find ways to make their lives more interesting and fruitful and satisfying. How devastating that your accident cut that time short. You would have been wonderful in that role. Well written.
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Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Hello my friend Wendy, Sitting by the fire? Only 8C this a.m. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. I will never forget the angels. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Brooke Goodinson
This piece grabbed my attention straight from the start. I saw the length of it but wanted more. I find if they are lengthy pieces you need to focus on the starting sentence by making sure you capture ones interest. You did this so well and I feel I know the three angels. Thank you for your piece it was heartfelt and genuine and so beautifully written.
Well done
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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This piece grabbed my attention straight from the start. I saw the length of it but wanted more. I find if they are lengthy pieces you need to focus on the starting sentence by making sure you capture ones interest. You did this so well and I feel I know the three angels. Thank you for your piece it was heartfelt and genuine and so beautifully written.
Well done
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 29-May-2021
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Hello Brooke, Thanks so much for your kind review. It was a special time in my life. Blessings, Kay XX
