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An adventure or is it pure terror?22 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
Haha nice story, I love the twist. Boys shouldn't reject their sisters as they can be great fun too. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
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reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Haha nice story, I love the twist. Boys shouldn't reject their sisters as they can be great fun too. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
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Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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I appreciate your review and the fact you enjoyed it. Yes, don't underestimate those sisters. Have a great day!
Comment from DentedSyke
The ending is great! Although this was quite reminiscent of "Ghostbusters," I still liked it. The story is told well, and leaving the sister behind is woven into the delightful ending. Good job, and good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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The ending is great! Although this was quite reminiscent of "Ghostbusters," I still liked it. The story is told well, and leaving the sister behind is woven into the delightful ending. Good job, and good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Yes, Ghostbusters was on Edward's mind...he was going to save the day by leaving his sister behind. OOPS! a big mistake. Girls like to get payback! Thank you and have a great day!
