Comment from Andy Sea

Excellent

A timely theme considering the events taking place. Well constructed lines. Excellent choice of artwork depicting dark times. Tugs at the heartstrings.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021

Thanks, Andy, for giving this a look.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Congratulations on your prize Bill! Not surprised! Glad I caught up to this one--the title is star-worthy in itself--brilliant coinage==NOmorrow. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021

Thank you, Liz

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is excellent and should be right at the top in the contest. Best of luck. Excellent presentation with the artwork choice. Gossamer is a great description and with greeting you have excellent alliteration. Dark angel sounds foreboding. You know something bad is coming. Could it be the final day? judi

 Comment Written 13-May-2021

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reply by the author on 13-May-2021

Thank you, Judi, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by judiverse on 13-May-2021

You're welcome. Best of luck with this. judi

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a rather eerie poem. I 've never heard of a gossamer angel but I assume by the name of your poem, this must be the angel of death. I think I'd rather see a light at the end of tunnel. That angel looks a little like a tornado. Either way they might might be no tomorrow.

 Comment Written 11-May-2021

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reply by the author on 11-May-2021

Thank you, Beth, for checking this out.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I like this idea of a warning before we die, some do not get that, love the artwork it is as if it has come to whisk somebody away, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 11-May-2021

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reply by the author on 11-May-2021

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Bill, most people would not even consider writing about the angel of death, but you have.
I think both your poem and the illustration, you have chosen, are bold and beautiful.

 Comment Written 10-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thanks, Suzanna, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky

Excellent

"Nomorrow," as the title suggests, implies there is no tomorrow.
Honestly, there's not really much to say when the final day arrives.
Maybe it really is the final day. Maybe not. Maybe we just think it's the final day. If it is the final day, how will we know for sure?Anyway, this poem gives us something to think about.

 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thank you, Roberta

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This was a doom and gloom poem alright, the end of the world is coming, however, in such few words, it is written that the end is sad and comes gently, quietly, and almost to a whisper. It is not the loud fire and fury that is usually written about the end.
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 09-May-2021

Thanks, Mary

Comment from Kiara Wiggins

Good

This isn't a typical depiction of an angel or even a dark angel. I like how it appears to be more monstrous or extra-terrestrial instead of angelic. It gives the darker intent of the final day. It almost appears to be a tornado that has taken out its surroundings much like what a dark angel is. Cool!

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 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 09-May-2021

Thank you, Kiara

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

What a chilling 5-7-5 and a great entry for the contest. I find the picture to be an appropriately disturbing essence of the dark angel.

Very well done.

 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 09-May-2021

Thank you, Erika