Sands of Normandy
A patriotic poem inspired by a true experience that I had.59 total reviews
Comment from Cogitator
Wonderful story within the poem. Being born in France gives me a special perspective. Schools teach the landing at Normandy in great detail and cements World War II as pivotal in global development. I will be using my hourglass timer with a new mind from now on...John
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Wonderful story within the poem. Being born in France gives me a special perspective. Schools teach the landing at Normandy in great detail and cements World War II as pivotal in global development. I will be using my hourglass timer with a new mind from now on...John
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks, John. The landing at Normandy must be one of the most important battles in modern warfare.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Sands of Normandy', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-breaking piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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'Sands of Normandy', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-breaking piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Duchess. Sorry about the broken heart.
Thank you Paul. You're not as sorry as I am 💖
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Edward Escobar
I was deeply moved. This particular special verse commanded a unique story involving a time of war but also a passage combined, turned into a diary like moment that accommodated the individuality of a person sharing an important piece of that very past, what I found as the inspirational epitome of everything. Much enjoyed and I thank you for sharing such a powerful verse.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I was deeply moved. This particular special verse commanded a unique story involving a time of war but also a passage combined, turned into a diary like moment that accommodated the individuality of a person sharing an important piece of that very past, what I found as the inspirational epitome of everything. Much enjoyed and I thank you for sharing such a powerful verse.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your review, Edward. It was a powerful experience.
Comment from robyn corum
Paul,
I can see why you'd want to be sure and show this guy off to as many people as possible. Especially right now, I am overjoyed to see the patriotism and love, and honor that are so vividly and wonderfully expressed here. It's a beautiful piece. Thank you!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Paul,
I can see why you'd want to be sure and show this guy off to as many people as possible. Especially right now, I am overjoyed to see the patriotism and love, and honor that are so vividly and wonderfully expressed here. It's a beautiful piece. Thank you!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Robyn. Always look forward to your reviews.
Comment from GentleWind
As I read this a loud to myself, the tears began to fall. Your way of expressing this reality is mind boggling! You brought me on your journey of memories. This flowed beautifully, and the visuals were outstanding! You did a great job with the structure and the rhyme. Extremely well done!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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As I read this a loud to myself, the tears began to fall. Your way of expressing this reality is mind boggling! You brought me on your journey of memories. This flowed beautifully, and the visuals were outstanding! You did a great job with the structure and the rhyme. Extremely well done!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. I shed some tears myself when I wrote it.
Comment from Cristine22
Such a lovely poem and story. I love the idea of putting that sand in an hourglass where you can see it all the time.
I'm impressed with the way your words flow and with how you tell the story so well while keeping in the poetic form.
Very well done!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Such a lovely poem and story. I love the idea of putting that sand in an hourglass where you can see it all the time.
I'm impressed with the way your words flow and with how you tell the story so well while keeping in the poetic form.
Very well done!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Christine. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Very good poem. It was so sad but written well. Its sad whart the soldiers went through and now they rest in their graves. I wonder if any one vist their graves much anymore. You have a awsome poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Very good poem. It was so sad but written well. Its sad whart the soldiers went through and now they rest in their graves. I wonder if any one vist their graves much anymore. You have a awsome poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Eunice. There are a number of military cemeteries in Europe.
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Okay you are welcome
Comment from pookietoo
This is a fantastic war and history poem with great rhyming. I hope you enjoy writing poems. I hope you are well and happy. Keep smiling and writing great poems.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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This is a fantastic war and history poem with great rhyming. I hope you enjoy writing poems. I hope you are well and happy. Keep smiling and writing great poems.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Pookie. I do enjoy writing poems. I'm not writing as much lately because I'm on this website all the time. I've got to change my ways.
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Welcome
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I enjoy writing poems and stories. I wrote a story called A Tornado is coming.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
And now when I turn that old hour glass
And watch the sand as it pours,
There's an extra minute of time in that hour
That I think of those Normandy shores.
This genuinely brought tears to my eyes, Having been to Normandy to view the graves myself...this is amazing and could easily win. WELL DONE kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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And now when I turn that old hour glass
And watch the sand as it pours,
There's an extra minute of time in that hour
That I think of those Normandy shores.
This genuinely brought tears to my eyes, Having been to Normandy to view the graves myself...this is amazing and could easily win. WELL DONE kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks Meia. It brought tears to my eyes when I wrote it.
Comment from SimianSavant
This is a really awesome piece, all leading up to that last bit about the extra minute. Man, people are going to remember reading that last stanza. I know I will. Thank you for putting this out there.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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This is a really awesome piece, all leading up to that last bit about the extra minute. Man, people are going to remember reading that last stanza. I know I will. Thank you for putting this out there.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. My muse was working overtime that day.
