Walk With Me.
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Dear..."From victim to survivor of abuse.
5 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Shirly, the thing about child abuse my sweet friend...
is it never stays away...nightmares are uncontrolled...
your story is true and from the heart...
though your poem is sad...it's very well written sweet girl...and I like the rhythm and the rhyme...
your picture speaks for itself Shirly...love you girl...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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HI Shirly, the thing about child abuse my sweet friend...
is it never stays away...nightmares are uncontrolled...
your story is true and from the heart...
though your poem is sad...it's very well written sweet girl...and I like the rhythm and the rhyme...
your picture speaks for itself Shirly...love you girl...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much Linda. Your review and understanding are truly appreciated.
Blessings
Shirley
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your so welcome Shirley, sorry I misspelled your name...I hope you are doing well...please take care...and Blessings to you as well...lots of love...xxoo
Comment from Teri7
Shirley, I wish I had six stars to give you for this really well written poem about the inner child. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the cute picture you shared. thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Shirley, I wish I had six stars to give you for this really well written poem about the inner child. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the cute picture you shared. thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thanks Teri.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Shirley, there you go reading my mind (LOL).
Your first stanza was outstanding. I feel we have time to contemplate more as we age and question/confront the 'whys' and 'hows' of the negative thoughts of our youth. You expressed this exceptionally well in this stanza.
I love the easy flow of rhyme and rhythm, each line of your poem being exactly 8 syllables.
So well illustrated. Love the photo.
Take care dear lady and blessings to you.
Gale
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Shirley, there you go reading my mind (LOL).
Your first stanza was outstanding. I feel we have time to contemplate more as we age and question/confront the 'whys' and 'hows' of the negative thoughts of our youth. You expressed this exceptionally well in this stanza.
I love the easy flow of rhyme and rhythm, each line of your poem being exactly 8 syllables.
So well illustrated. Love the photo.
Take care dear lady and blessings to you.
Gale
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you.
I appreciate you .
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a poem of strength and grace. It seems to tell of healing from child abuse. Writing does help is cathartic and helps with healing.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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This is a poem of strength and grace. It seems to tell of healing from child abuse. Writing does help is cathartic and helps with healing.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you for an in depth review.
Your review is appreciated as is the six star review.
Blessings
Shirley
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You're welcome on both accounts, Shirley.
Joan
Comment from Pantygynt
The unity of this poem is provided by the unwavering iambic tetrameter. The rhyme scheme is variable, couplets in the first stanza, assonant throughout in both the second and fourth, story rhyme in the third and aaba in the fifth.
There is no requirement for there to be a unity of rhyme although it is frequently found, and the lack of it here did not jar with me at all.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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The unity of this poem is provided by the unwavering iambic tetrameter. The rhyme scheme is variable, couplets in the first stanza, assonant throughout in both the second and fourth, story rhyme in the third and aaba in the fifth.
There is no requirement for there to be a unity of rhyme although it is frequently found, and the lack of it here did not jar with me at all.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and review.
I've been off site a lot over the last year and hence neglected my poetry.
I'm probably a little rusty.
So glad you enjoyed it and it was very therapeutic for me.
Blessings
Shirley
