Accidental Prisoner
An accidental murder story.2 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Hmmm...in prison for an accident or did he plan it to look that way. Did he imprison himself with his guilt? There's a lot to be found in these few short words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hmmm...in prison for an accident or did he plan it to look that way. Did he imprison himself with his guilt? There's a lot to be found in these few short words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you! He didn't really wanted to kill his parents. Carl wanted to show them that he is able to use and be responsible for the use of a gun. It was an accident. Thank you, again!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
The subject matter is deeply intense. I think you could take another pass and use more harrowing language. It feels a little casual for the choice of topic. I commend you for the risk and guts to take on such a tough subject.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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The subject matter is deeply intense. I think you could take another pass and use more harrowing language. It feels a little casual for the choice of topic. I commend you for the risk and guts to take on such a tough subject.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
