Mirror, Mirror, what do I see?
Happiness is right here with me-10 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The story is delightful, but a little difficult to follow. In my judgment, I like the author's notes better than the story. Maybe, because it is about us at Fan Story. Famous storybook characters are great for children but, I feel too adult to get into this story. I will try something else that might be more to my liking.
Have a great day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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The story is delightful, but a little difficult to follow. In my judgment, I like the author's notes better than the story. Maybe, because it is about us at Fan Story. Famous storybook characters are great for children but, I feel too adult to get into this story. I will try something else that might be more to my liking.
Have a great day,
Jesse
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hi Jesse....this was just a story for a contest that I wrote...not my usual style. Thanks for the review. Carol
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Hello Carol.
I'm sorry I wasn't as positive as you were with my posts. As you said, it was not your usual style.
Have a nice day,
Jesse
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Not a problem... Didn't bother me a bit. Just keep on smiling!
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All right! Let's both keep smiling!
Comment from muffinmama
I think I'll keep this one for my granddaughter; it's delightful!
It reminds me of a play we put on at camp when I was 10. It was called "The Mystery of the Fractured Fairy Tales." All the "good guys" were in the story we created.
Thanks for the sweet break in my day.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I think I'll keep this one for my granddaughter; it's delightful!
It reminds me of a play we put on at camp when I was 10. It was called "The Mystery of the Fractured Fairy Tales." All the "good guys" were in the story we created.
Thanks for the sweet break in my day.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Oh, thank you so much. I am going to combine some of them and publish for my grandchildren as well. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day!
Comment from Alaskastory
"Mirror, Mirror, what do I see?" is cleverly done. It makes quite a fairytale adventure and certainly will be entertaining for children, especially when it becomes accompanied by adorable illustrations.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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"Mirror, Mirror, what do I see?" is cleverly done. It makes quite a fairytale adventure and certainly will be entertaining for children, especially when it becomes accompanied by adorable illustrations.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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i thank you very much for stopping by to read and review my little children's story. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A mirror that makes you look special and beautiful, part of celebrating life and joy to be among friends. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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A mirror that makes you look special and beautiful, part of celebrating life and joy to be among friends. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Appreciate your kindness as always. Have a great day!
Comment from writer723
This is a cute and sweet story that I found enjoyable. The animal characters were interesting with quirks and opinions all their own. This fact really brought them to life. I like how everyone banded together to help Cinder prepare for the party. In the end, she decided to share her birthday with her true friends. What a nice theme!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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This is a cute and sweet story that I found enjoyable. The animal characters were interesting with quirks and opinions all their own. This fact really brought them to life. I like how everyone banded together to help Cinder prepare for the party. In the end, she decided to share her birthday with her true friends. What a nice theme!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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It's dark outside - no sun - but you lit up my morning with your beautiful and kind words plus the shiny stars. It's just a little moral for us to remember and I thought the tiny animals gave it charm. Thank you so so much ... Ooops! Almost signed my name --- Have a great day!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow well with a good story to tell. I like the way all the critters worked together to help Cinder. She in return realized that those were her true friends and not those at some fancy party in the castle. I like the personification of the critters. Your image is perfect. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow well with a good story to tell. I like the way all the critters worked together to help Cinder. She in return realized that those were her true friends and not those at some fancy party in the castle. I like the personification of the critters. Your image is perfect. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Well, I thank you very much for such a kind and wonderful review. I appreciate that the moral came through clearly. With so few words to work with, it's difficult at times. I hoped the little animals added another dimension to the fairy tale. Thanks again!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I really like the way you wove these fairy tale characters together and gave them a family type feel. My only suggestion would be to bring the mirror more into the acton of the story.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I really like the way you wove these fairy tale characters together and gave them a family type feel. My only suggestion would be to bring the mirror more into the acton of the story.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your suggestion and for stopping by to read the story.
Comment from Ben B.
That was a hilarious twist on the old fairytales. I'm pretty sure I saw a few Cinderella characters in there. Which story may I ask did you get the chipmunks from?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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That was a hilarious twist on the old fairytales. I'm pretty sure I saw a few Cinderella characters in there. Which story may I ask did you get the chipmunks from?
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Alvin and the Chipmunks - my son's favorite (well, a long time ago it was). I have no idea why this popped into my head since I think I was supposed to write a scary one - but the mirror said otherwise. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind review. Have a terrific day!
Comment from RetroStarfish
This little story is just delightful! I love how all the fairy tale characters and woodland creatures come to life and interact. Very clever. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This little story is just delightful! I love how all the fairy tale characters and woodland creatures come to life and interact. Very clever. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. I truly appreciate it. Have a terrific day!
Comment from Judy Lawless
So you write children's stories too? This is a wonderful story for kids and adults alike, with so many characters from classic fairy tales. Good for you, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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So you write children's stories too? This is a wonderful story for kids and adults alike, with so many characters from classic fairy tales. Good for you, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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How does wordy me cram this story into 250 words - Had to rewrite it five times or more. Thank you for enjoying it and for leaving a wonderful review. Have a terrific day!
