Chair Side Romantic
This is my love story26 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mary,
I enjoyed your story very much. Your poor husband was just trying to right the wrongs, and just show you a little affection in public. He's the same as me. I'm a very private person. And I can just imagine how awkward it was for him to show his feelings in front of strangers. But then to have his chair break! He must have been mortified.
This was a terrific entry for the True Story Flash contest. Well done!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Hi Mary,
I enjoyed your story very much. Your poor husband was just trying to right the wrongs, and just show you a little affection in public. He's the same as me. I'm a very private person. And I can just imagine how awkward it was for him to show his feelings in front of strangers. But then to have his chair break! He must have been mortified.
This was a terrific entry for the True Story Flash contest. Well done!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you Kimbob, you are correct, he is a very private person which is ok by me.
Thank you for the review.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment from Ronni
Hi Mary,
Sometimes a chair side romantic wins the day and the honors that
are all the more sentimentally sweet, and so personality orientated
that it is all the more meaningful and memorable. For the fault
of the chair, the theater ticket treat he scores an even bigger hit
and all the more memorable heart-applause for you!
Thanks for sharing, enjoyed this real human nature story,
Best always, Ronni
P.S, Had computer glitch on my comp, seems I missed couple of
your posts, will be getting back to soon.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hi Mary,
Sometimes a chair side romantic wins the day and the honors that
are all the more sentimentally sweet, and so personality orientated
that it is all the more meaningful and memorable. For the fault
of the chair, the theater ticket treat he scores an even bigger hit
and all the more memorable heart-applause for you!
Thanks for sharing, enjoyed this real human nature story,
Best always, Ronni
P.S, Had computer glitch on my comp, seems I missed couple of
your posts, will be getting back to soon.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you Ronni, I appreciate your kind words and review. Your right, I love the theatre and it made the evening even better.
I am having computer problems too! I was lucky to get on this morning.
Regards,
Mary
Comment from bhogg
This was really cute. I'm entered in this one as well and with yours have seen several that seem better than mine. Best of luck in the contest, or at least good luck on getting second place! Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This was really cute. I'm entered in this one as well and with yours have seen several that seem better than mine. Best of luck in the contest, or at least good luck on getting second place! Regards, Bill
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate your kind comments and review.
Good luck to you.
Regards
Mary
Comment from robyn corum
Mary!
Oh, no! Well, that'll teach him to try to steal a kiss when he's in public, huh? Sometimes you just can't win. hahahaha But at least, you have a precious and sweet story to tell. Thanks!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Mary!
Oh, no! Well, that'll teach him to try to steal a kiss when he's in public, huh? Sometimes you just can't win. hahahaha But at least, you have a precious and sweet story to tell. Thanks!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review. It is appreciated. Maybe next time it will be the story how I spilled hot cheese on his head.
Regards
Mary
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Oh, wow!!! WHAT??!!!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hahahaha, oh my goodness. I could picture that perfectly in my mind. Wife, anticipating a smooth move. Husband, dealing with a malfunctioning chair.
Cute story!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hahahaha, oh my goodness. I could picture that perfectly in my mind. Wife, anticipating a smooth move. Husband, dealing with a malfunctioning chair.
Cute story!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your reading and review.
Regards
Mary
Comment from Cromwell Estes
This is a really great story! I love flash fiction and this was a great piece to read. I love the hilarity in the end, and really appreciate this work! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is a really great story! I love flash fiction and this was a great piece to read. I love the hilarity in the end, and really appreciate this work! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind comments and review.
It is appreciated.
Regards
Mary
Comment from Alaskastory
"Chair Side Romantic" is completely amusing and most romantic. I hope leaning forward can happen again for your husband without worry. You are clever to make this event into a very short story.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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"Chair Side Romantic" is completely amusing and most romantic. I hope leaning forward can happen again for your husband without worry. You are clever to make this event into a very short story.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind comments and review.
It is appreciated.
Regards
Mary
Comment from muffinmama
This is quite humorous.
You build up the possibility that your husband has changed his ways, just to reveal the surprise ending.
He's a keeper!
I'm married to one of those too. No PDA. However, he is always surprising me with gifts and interesting outings; there's no one more loyal and dedicated. I have never once doubted his love.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is quite humorous.
You build up the possibility that your husband has changed his ways, just to reveal the surprise ending.
He's a keeper!
I'm married to one of those too. No PDA. However, he is always surprising me with gifts and interesting outings; there's no one more loyal and dedicated. I have never once doubted his love.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind comments and review. Your husband too is a keeper, there is more to love than a public display. Like covering you up at night it's when its cold.
Regards,
Mary
Comment from Bill Schott
This short short story, Chairside Romantic, proves that one should stick with his rules and do not go out on in limb in a crowd. Of course, no one falls in a vaccuum.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This short short story, Chairside Romantic, proves that one should stick with his rules and do not go out on in limb in a crowd. Of course, no one falls in a vaccuum.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you Bill for the review. It is appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Davis
I love this story. Great lead up to the humorous ending that made me chuckle out loud. Your choice of title gives nothing away, but is a very fitting one. Thank you for sharing this well written story.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I love this story. Great lead up to the humorous ending that made me chuckle out loud. Your choice of title gives nothing away, but is a very fitting one. Thank you for sharing this well written story.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you Sharon. I appreciate your review and kind comments.
Regards,
Mary