Autumn Flowers
a six-word poem18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Bill, I like how you matched the font color with the flowers in the artwork. Maybe these flowers hum with bees. I like the personification and the rhyme.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
Bill, I like how you matched the font color with the flowers in the artwork. Maybe these flowers hum with bees. I like the personification and the rhyme.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Joan
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You're welcome, Bill.
Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Bill--congrats on your prize for this charming piece--brilliant assonance with UMS --four out of six words--takes this over the top. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
Bill--congrats on your prize for this charming piece--brilliant assonance with UMS --four out of six words--takes this over the top. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Liz, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from samandlancelot
Bill,
I like your clever rhymes and the sounds of autumn in your hums and mons, and mums. Your presentation is good, too. Congratulations on placing in the contest!
Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
Bill,
I like your clever rhymes and the sounds of autumn in your hums and mons, and mums. Your presentation is good, too. Congratulations on placing in the contest!
Patricia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Patricia
Comment from Begin Again
First of all, I can't imagine making a poem out 6 words (I get quite wordy with my stories) lol but you did a fantastic job of rhyming and blending it with your choice of artwork. Fabulous! I also chose this particular poem because it only has 14 reviews and the next one will earn you a ribbon.... It's called Robyn's Surprise! Have a great day! Smiles from Carol
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
First of all, I can't imagine making a poem out 6 words (I get quite wordy with my stories) lol but you did a fantastic job of rhyming and blending it with your choice of artwork. Fabulous! I also chose this particular poem because it only has 14 reviews and the next one will earn you a ribbon.... It's called Robyn's Surprise! Have a great day! Smiles from Carol
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Well thank you so much, Carol. I read that piece and will search for those opportunities too. Happy day.
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Smiles to you, my friend! Have a great day!
Comment from BethShelby
I must say this poem has originality. Who would have thought of putting persimmons and chrysanthemums, We use to have a persimmon tree in the corner of our yard. They weren't my favorite fruit but it had to be fall before they ripened. If you tried to eat one before the frost came it was awful.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
I must say this poem has originality. Who would have thought of putting persimmons and chrysanthemums, We use to have a persimmon tree in the corner of our yard. They weren't my favorite fruit but it had to be fall before they ripened. If you tried to eat one before the frost came it was awful.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Beth.
Comment from Earl Corp
i have to give six stars to anyone who can write a six word poem that rhymes and makes sense. Kudos!!! Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
i have to give six stars to anyone who can write a six word poem that rhymes and makes sense. Kudos!!! Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Earl. I appreciate the high marks.
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey, Bill. Fall hues and hums do have their particular flavours and you have captured those perfectly within six words. I was thinking it might be more so that is magic.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
Hey, Bill. Fall hues and hums do have their particular flavours and you have captured those perfectly within six words. I was thinking it might be more so that is magic.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Gloria
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill:
Your photo is really nice. I like your six word poem. It captures the essence of autumn with the photo and the flowers you mention.
Nice colors for the body of the poem.
Good to hear from you, Bill.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
Bill:
Your photo is really nice. I like your six word poem. It captures the essence of autumn with the photo and the flowers you mention.
Nice colors for the body of the poem.
Good to hear from you, Bill.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Cindy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Wonderful and beautiful wording. I love that word flow of hums, mons and mum. It is perfect for such a short poem. I image you choose is perfect for brightening up the image and the use of color in the words.
Thank you for the read.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
Wonderful and beautiful wording. I love that word flow of hums, mons and mum. It is perfect for such a short poem. I image you choose is perfect for brightening up the image and the use of color in the words.
Thank you for the read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Mary
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, when you wax poetical, you do it in spades. This is an absolutely terrific and beautiful Six Word Poem. That you have chosen to match your picture with text in color, makes reading it, a sheer delight.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
Dear Bill, when you wax poetical, you do it in spades. This is an absolutely terrific and beautiful Six Word Poem. That you have chosen to match your picture with text in color, makes reading it, a sheer delight.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Suzanna