Within the Bone
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "A Clarity"A tale of love, magic, and revenge.
3 total reviews
Comment from AJ McCall
Geeze... This demon is not playing!!! The description is on fleek; want to write something like that. I love how you described the horns running back through the stranger's hair. I'm trying to catch up with the other stories but I gotta say this one and She Walks In Beauty are my favorites so far. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Geeze... This demon is not playing!!! The description is on fleek; want to write something like that. I love how you described the horns running back through the stranger's hair. I'm trying to catch up with the other stories but I gotta say this one and She Walks In Beauty are my favorites so far. Will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
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Glad to hear it came across well. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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You're welcome!!!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I think it's a very specific kind of talent can write in this type of genre. You create an entirely new world and make it very believable. Classical yet relatable. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I think it's a very specific kind of talent can write in this type of genre. You create an entirely new world and make it very believable. Classical yet relatable. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Sorry for the delay on reply.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You are a good writer and have an interesting story. I don't know if I have read any of this before or not, but the story flows well and is understandable even with no previous reading. I do question your use of the word scalpel, which seems to this world and not your world.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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You are a good writer and have an interesting story. I don't know if I have read any of this before or not, but the story flows well and is understandable even with no previous reading. I do question your use of the word scalpel, which seems to this world and not your world.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. I'm trying to be better about having fragments understandable without the whole work up for view. Sorry about the delay in reply.
