Cause and Effect
Each affects the other10 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
I like your caption for the two line poem
Not easy to find an attention getter for such a limited contest.
Your choice of art captures ones attention
and the two comments are that of a gifted thinker, a genius.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I like your caption for the two line poem
Not easy to find an attention getter for such a limited contest.
Your choice of art captures ones attention
and the two comments are that of a gifted thinker, a genius.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from dragonpoet
First, congratulations of the second place finish in the contest.
The words and artwork match well. It seems like this person just daydreams and doesn't act. You need to physically wander from place to place to have more a better things to ponder.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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First, congratulations of the second place finish in the contest.
The words and artwork match well. It seems like this person just daydreams and doesn't act. You need to physically wander from place to place to have more a better things to ponder.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
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Any time.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize, Mia! This very witty two liner would make a great slogan for bumper stickers and T-shirts--clever rhyme with ponder/wander. Cheers. LIZ
Note: (title) each effects=>AFFECTS the other
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Congrats on your prize, Mia! This very witty two liner would make a great slogan for bumper stickers and T-shirts--clever rhyme with ponder/wander. Cheers. LIZ
Note: (title) each effects=>AFFECTS the other
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you for pointing that out.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Although only four words: "Internally ponder, Externally wander," they have a lot of hidden meaning.
Sometime when you see things, they may not appear like what they are, you wonder until you find out the truth.
Good thinking to come out with these words.
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Although only four words: "Internally ponder, Externally wander," they have a lot of hidden meaning.
Sometime when you see things, they may not appear like what they are, you wonder until you find out the truth.
Good thinking to come out with these words.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. Your 4 words comprise the correct syllable count. Your rhymes work, Your message is loud and clear and gives readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry. Your 4 words comprise the correct syllable count. Your rhymes work, Your message is loud and clear and gives readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Mistydawn
We all need to reflect on one's inner self so we know how to move forward with out lives. Your poem is well-written, interesting, thought-proving. A hard feat using so few words. Great job. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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We all need to reflect on one's inner self so we know how to move forward with out lives. Your poem is well-written, interesting, thought-proving. A hard feat using so few words. Great job. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I am so honored you liked it.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
I love the poem and it's awesome for the Two line poem contest! Good luck on the win;-)
It's difficult to make a two line poem make sense but you've managed to do just that and then some;-)
It is an exceptional poem, indeed! Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I love the poem and it's awesome for the Two line poem contest! Good luck on the win;-)
It's difficult to make a two line poem make sense but you've managed to do just that and then some;-)
It is an exceptional poem, indeed! Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the stars. I am so honored. I wanted each word to count and it seems they did. I am glad you liked it.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Four words only here to create a connection that intrigues us and people watching is a great pastime as we try to gather information about people's lives, your write leaves we puzzling with the truth behind people's eyes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Four words only here to create a connection that intrigues us and people watching is a great pastime as we try to gather information about people's lives, your write leaves we puzzling with the truth behind people's eyes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I love that you are left wondering about what is behind another's eyes. The eyes can tell so much about a person.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ponder-wonder, slumber nice world play 'Internally ponder
Externally wander" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Ponder-wonder, slumber nice world play 'Internally ponder
Externally wander" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Nolen
Very interesting. I first wondered if your second sentence should have been Externally Wonder. But I stopped wondering. I get it.
It is amazing that you could create just two sentences to say a lot.
The picture was very interesting, too. Is it a reflection of oneself?
Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Very interesting. I first wondered if your second sentence should have been Externally Wonder. But I stopped wondering. I get it.
It is amazing that you could create just two sentences to say a lot.
The picture was very interesting, too. Is it a reflection of oneself?
Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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When I first started this piece I did have it as Externally Wonder. However, as I played around with the words to find the right ones I felt it needed to be the other way around. Interesting that you thought about that too.
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Well, I'm no expert for sure. I was just curious about that. As I said, you did a great job.