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Poems and Prose

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Comment from Stephen Force
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Cute poem, I like the cutey-patootie opening, and the irony of love Grandma, and let's zoom. as if Grandma and zoom is compatible:) Nice job have a good week.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
    Thanks again Stephen.
    Linda
Comment from Omar sb
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"She's a firecracker's bang. A spark in the room. A show-stopping diva. Now call me, let's zoom." Hahaha. I love it!
Yeah... Grandma's are one-of-a-kind.
Clever, cute, an all-around very good children's poem!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
    Thank you Omar...I'm smilin'
    Linda
Comment from kmoss
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Such a cute poem for your granddaughter. It sounds like it describes her boisterous personality to a t. I like this part the best:she's strawberry shortcake
with whipped cream on top
she's a tot with a tater
no jellybean flop
I also like the description you used "love, grandma" how sweet

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
    Thank You so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Linda