Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Jake,
This is a cute, romantic and to the point four line mono-rhyme poem. It tells of the beginning of the relationship and its growth through marriage.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

thanks for the positive comment

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Jan-2021

Any time, Jake.
Joan

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Well done Jake. The rhyming is perfect almost sing/song that can easily be recited and remembered. I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

thanks for the positive comment

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

You dreamt of her, once you met her on a cosmic date and she put your heart checkmate and you made her mate on that very date; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

thanks for the positive comment

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

Such a sweet poem, how lucky for you both. Four lines and rhymes very well, flows nicely. I think adding a picture may help bring some more attention to it. Hopefully does well in the contest! Best of luck

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

thanks for the positive comment