Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Clever stuff indeed, Mate: I've not seen anything like this before on FS.

"We look forward to Molly,
For many more years,
Greeting our visitors
And no more tears."

Bless you. Bob

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Hey mate! Glad I got a FIRSTon FS. Appreciate your lovely review.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a very cute poem about a cloth creature who has been around a long time and was now needing a new body. She doesn't look quite as mouse like in the new suit she has but lets hope it lasts for a long time.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020

Thanks for coming by.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the revival of Molly Mouse and even has a renewed appearance that will last for quite a few years in the future to greet the guests with a smile.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020

Thanks, Sis for your lovely review. Gail gave us a choice of the fabric and that was the one we chose.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Is this a door stop? They are very useful and I have a couple of wooden ones! This is a fun rhyming poem and you made me smile here, much fun, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020

Thanks for the lovely review. We were given the option on some different fabric this is what we chose.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A beautifully written and composed poem, about one of your own wonderful literary inventions, this character is a wonderful person to use a series fo kiddies perhaps Geoffrey, well done, my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020

Thanks Bro Roy glad you enjoyed it. Goof idea to think about too.

reply by royowen on 08-Dec-2020

Well done

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Good one Sankey. I think I remember Molly. Yes, bring her on and we will get to see what she is up to. Chang a pace for me. I get tired of reading so much drama.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020

Thanks Bro Ben for coming along.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray for Molly's new attire! Thanks for the update on how Molly the mouse is doing and the great upgrade in wardrobe she got. Blessings to you and Louise!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks dear friend. This has had a lot of lovely reviews. You may have missed a changed word I was doing while you were reading I think. Changed "has" to "have" for the needle and cotton.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

Ah, I wondered about Molly and if you could find a seamstress to redress her. You did, and now she is back to her duties in top shape. Well done!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks for the lovely review. Glad you liked the poem.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a fun verse to read with your fun descriptions and adorable main character. Your use of the abcb rhyme scheme was perfect and set up this poem to be an enjoyable read. Well done, Sankey.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks for pointing out the format type. I appreciate the lovely review.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

A clever bit of whimsy in fine rhyme. Puts me in mind of a similar beloved, albeit bedraggled creature featured several months ago by a lady on this site--hers functioned as a door-stop.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020

Thanks for coming by. Trying to find an old teddy to get made over as well.