In God's Eyes
Contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Wonderful poem!
There are so many entries I am afraid some of the exceptional ones won't get proper viewing, such as yours.
The artwork is perfect.
The wording is really good. Using black and white top and bottom and an excellent line in the middle.
I don't think you could have done better.
The cats' tails look like a heart I think but maybe I'm just a romantic :)
I will tell you that I've heard contest judges and older folks much prefer bigger type than this so they can see it well. I am told some folks sometimes don't read an entry that they have to squint to see. If you can change the size, I think it would be a good idea.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Wonderful poem!
There are so many entries I am afraid some of the exceptional ones won't get proper viewing, such as yours.
The artwork is perfect.
The wording is really good. Using black and white top and bottom and an excellent line in the middle.
I don't think you could have done better.
The cats' tails look like a heart I think but maybe I'm just a romantic :)
I will tell you that I've heard contest judges and older folks much prefer bigger type than this so they can see it well. I am told some folks sometimes don't read an entry that they have to squint to see. If you can change the size, I think it would be a good idea.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much for reading, and for your wonderful comments. As for (fur?) the tails, is good to see love wherever you can! And what a great tip about font size; that's very helpful!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-9-1, In God's Eyes, has the right set up and places the ebony and ivory felines together in an harmonious basket nap that has an impossible heart of tails.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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This 1-9-1, In God's Eyes, has the right set up and places the ebony and ivory felines together in an harmonious basket nap that has an impossible heart of tails.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Bill.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-9-1 poem for the contest
with a nice take on black and white, how all are equal
in God's eyes.
Perfect picture to match.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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You've written an excellent 1-9-1 poem for the contest
with a nice take on black and white, how all are equal
in God's eyes.
Perfect picture to match.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you rs, for taking the time to read and comment.
