Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Football Chapter 6 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
26 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Wow, tires slashed. Sure is a way of communicating! I hope they find the person who did that...they suspect Mr. Frost and I am sure he is the person in question. I will keep reading....
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Wow, tires slashed. Sure is a way of communicating! I hope they find the person who did that...they suspect Mr. Frost and I am sure he is the person in question. I will keep reading....
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I appreciate this.
Comment from AJ McCall
Haha! So Gabriel finally waited for Katherine, instead of 'pushing his way into everything'. This is so sweet but scary at the same time. Why can't Frost just give up? If it's even him. If it's someone else, who could it be? I'm dying to know. I noticed one line where the word, 'I' would've been useful: Paul offered, "I can take you home, but I have a meeting later so ( I ) won't be able to help any further."
Can't wait for the next chapter!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Haha! So Gabriel finally waited for Katherine, instead of 'pushing his way into everything'. This is so sweet but scary at the same time. Why can't Frost just give up? If it's even him. If it's someone else, who could it be? I'm dying to know. I noticed one line where the word, 'I' would've been useful: Paul offered, "I can take you home, but I have a meeting later so ( I ) won't be able to help any further."
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Will check out that area. Thank you for bringing to my attention.
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You're welcome!
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh dear, slashed tires. One flat tire is bad enough, but four? And tires are not inexpensive items to replace. I hope they catch the culprit. Good thing Katherine has such good friends.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Oh dear, slashed tires. One flat tire is bad enough, but four? And tires are not inexpensive items to replace. I hope they catch the culprit. Good thing Katherine has such good friends.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I hope they catch the bad guy too. Thank you for the kind reivew.
Comment from Sanku
Mrs Frost may not be as innocent as appears. Any way this unreasonable hatred is taking the peace of mind of a very hardworking person .Hope she has a good reprieve.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Mrs Frost may not be as innocent as appears. Any way this unreasonable hatred is taking the peace of mind of a very hardworking person .Hope she has a good reprieve.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
We just never know what kind of nut cases we might run into in this world, and it seems to get worse all the time. Great job in keeping us readers on the lookout for what might happen next. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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We just never know what kind of nut cases we might run into in this world, and it seems to get worse all the time. Great job in keeping us readers on the lookout for what might happen next. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear barbara, I have Never had the pleasure of reviewing any of your work before. I am so glad that I have found another writer, that has a story that I can follow with eagerness.
I would like to fan you, if that's OK with you, just so I can look at other things that you might have posted.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Dear barbara, I have Never had the pleasure of reviewing any of your work before. I am so glad that I have found another writer, that has a story that I can follow with eagerness.
I would like to fan you, if that's OK with you, just so I can look at other things that you might have posted.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement. Please do.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Poor thing, I don't know why that guy is so mean to her, after all is his own fault that he got fired in the first place. I like the idea how the school board is supporting her in this ordeal. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Poor thing, I don't know why that guy is so mean to her, after all is his own fault that he got fired in the first place. I like the idea how the school board is supporting her in this ordeal. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good chapter, Barbara,
that continues to show
how Katherine is being
harassed in different ways.
-I certainly didn't think her
tires would be slashed.
-It is a different scenario than
presented by Mrs. Frost.
-He obviously has major problems,
and if he did do this, he shouldn't
be allowed to roam free and do
as he pleases.
-At least Katherine has support
with friends at school and help
from her mother.
-But it has to be worrisome for
her, at the same time.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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-A good chapter, Barbara,
that continues to show
how Katherine is being
harassed in different ways.
-I certainly didn't think her
tires would be slashed.
-It is a different scenario than
presented by Mrs. Frost.
-He obviously has major problems,
and if he did do this, he shouldn't
be allowed to roam free and do
as he pleases.
-At least Katherine has support
with friends at school and help
from her mother.
-But it has to be worrisome for
her, at the same time.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are very welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Wendy G
Another interesting chapter, and again, I want to know more. I am looking forward to seeing how this develops. Your chapter is well written. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Another interesting chapter, and again, I want to know more. I am looking forward to seeing how this develops. Your chapter is well written. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
I think this would make a good clean movie. I am sure Frost will get help in the end and the coach and her will get things together or it looks that way. Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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I think this would make a good clean movie. I am sure Frost will get help in the end and the coach and her will get things together or it looks that way. Good one Barb.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.