Rainstorm Remembered
She came through the storm.3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet..I gave you your 3 th vote.
You had some tough competition but in the end I chose your poem because I just loved how you shared a moment of your past with us ..
I love your description of the storm
Lightening scratched the sky.. is my favourite line
Your words drew a vivid image in my mind
Your poem only gets better when unexpected help appears ( also usually it's the lady in distress that needs saving .. nice change )
A howling wind tries to snatch her umbrella
Lightning flashes
the western hawk rakes
her honey blonde hair,
I was swept away by your narrative , I wish I could write like that ... writing is your passion..that obvious
I' m a late starter .. only started writing two years ago.. but in my limits it's becoming a challenging and rewarding hobby ..
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Ciao mystery poet..I gave you your 3 th vote.
You had some tough competition but in the end I chose your poem because I just loved how you shared a moment of your past with us ..
I love your description of the storm
Lightening scratched the sky.. is my favourite line
Your words drew a vivid image in my mind
Your poem only gets better when unexpected help appears ( also usually it's the lady in distress that needs saving .. nice change )
A howling wind tries to snatch her umbrella
Lightning flashes
the western hawk rakes
her honey blonde hair,
I was swept away by your narrative , I wish I could write like that ... writing is your passion..that obvious
I' m a late starter .. only started writing two years ago.. but in my limits it's becoming a challenging and rewarding hobby ..
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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The secret is to read as much as you can and keep writing. Thanks for your read and encouraging review. Much appreciated.
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Ciao!
I?m glad you won a place on the podium ..
My mother was a big reader she had lots of books in English too .. I will try to read more .
Keep safe!
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How many times I have left my house without my brolly and regretted it. I have been caught out by storms over and over and you described my plight here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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How many times I have left my house without my brolly and regretted it. I have been caught out by storms over and over and you described my plight here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Dolly, for taking the time to read and comment. I always keep a brolly in the car. I learned my lesson.
Comment from Wendy G
Quite beautiful, a lovely memory of friendship, which makes one overcome the natural disinclination to venture into such a storm, but does so, for the sake of a friend. Well written.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Quite beautiful, a lovely memory of friendship, which makes one overcome the natural disinclination to venture into such a storm, but does so, for the sake of a friend. Well written.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging comment.