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Goodbye My Darling Brother Jim

A tribute to my brother

42 total reviews 
Comment from Lulube
Exceptional
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a very loving, heartfelt tribute and letter to your bro, Jim. He was never on fanstory was he? I
m sure he has received every word you have written and is sending his love to you for strength. God bless you.

lulube

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi lulube
    Thank you for your review and six stars. This is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
reply by Lulube on 11-Nov-2020
    Oh brother, life is not easy for anyone these days. Sorry that losing someone comes with extra burdens, it just isn't fair. I lost my dad in April and we still haven't had a funeral of any kind for him. To live to 92 yrs and not be put to rest by family and friends is so unjust for his life. Really bothers me. My sister did however, sign his name to an honorable plaque along with many other names for the dated butterfly release in their honor. There were hundreds of butterflies released and the people running it made a video that I am still waiting for my copy. It's my mom who is suffering not having her kids and friends beside her in a nursing home/ It kills me not to be able to hug her. Hope this virus gets satisfied with the numbers its destroyed and killed pretty soon. Take care and bless you and family for your loss but fond memories were created.

    lulube
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
    Hi lulube How awful for you and your family your dad deserves better at 92
    We made it to Jims funeral which was beautiful and I know he was watching over us
    No he wasn?t on FS only me
    Although he enjoyed my poetry and I wrote him a great one for his 60 th birthday a memory of growing up together
    I miss him terribly.
    cheers Chris
reply by Lulube on 13-Nov-2020
    iSN'T IT FUNNY HOW WE POETS, (i NOW CAN SAY THAT) WRITE FOR EVERY OCCASSION FOR FAMILY AND FRIENDS, i HAD JUST WRITTEN ONE FOR MY DAD'S B-DAY, 20 DAYS BEFORE HE PASSED AWAY, THEN i WROTE ANOTHER. THEY ARE HERE ON PORTFOLIO, I OFTEN GO BACK TO READ WHERE I WAS AT ON A CERTAIN TIME OF THE YEAR. I JUST WISH THIS SITE MADE IT EASY TO SAVE OR COPY WITHOUT ALL THE HEADINGS OR GIVING A LINK.

    LULUBE SORRY ABOUT CAPITALS I'M NOT YELLING
reply by Lulube on 13-Nov-2020
    iSN'T IT FUNNY HOW WE POETS, (i NOW CAN SAY THAT) WRITE FOR EVERY OCCASSION FOR FAMILY AND FRIENDS, i HAD JUST WRITTEN ONE FOR MY DAD'S B-DAY, 20 DAYS BEFORE HE PASSED AWAY, THEN i WROTE ANOTHER. THEY ARE HERE ON PORTFOLIO, I OFTEN GO BACK TO READ WHERE I WAS AT ON A CERTAIN TIME OF THE YEAR. I JUST WISH THIS SITE MADE IT EASY TO SAVE OR COPY WITHOUT ALL THE HEADINGS OR GIVING A LINK.

    LULUBE SORRY ABOUT CAPITALS I'M NOT YELLING
Comment from Father Flaps
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Dear Chris, I know only too well how you feel. We buried my father and younger brother two weeks apart this past summer. And we just had to put our big Maine Coon cat down last month. These things weigh down on a body.
I'm so sorry for your loss. My heart goes out to you. May God help you get to the funeral safely, and I know He will stand by your side as you give the eulogy for your dear brother, Jim.
A nicely penned tribute to your brother! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi Kimbob
    Thank you for your review and six stars.This is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
reply by Father Flaps on 08-Nov-2020
    You're welcome, Chrissy. I'm glad it all worked out for you, but that's a long drive! KB
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Christine, this poem is not only a beautiful tribute to your brother but a wonderful inventive way to let your FanStory friends know of his passing, and your grief,
that they may send you words of compassion and relief.
May God guide you in the days ahead and for the journey you must make for the sake of the dead.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi Suzanna
    Thank you for your review it is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Excellent
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Dear Christine, this poem is not only a beautiful tribute to your brother but a wonderful inventive way to let your FanStory friends know of his passing, and your grief,
that they may send you words of compassion and relief.
May God guide you in the days ahead and for the journey you must make for the sake of the dead.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Thanks Suzanne
Comment from Raul1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm so sorry that your brother passed away. My condolences to your family and friends. It is nice that you dedicated this wonderful poem to him. Thanks for sharing! Nice poem.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi Raul1
    Thank you for your review and six stars. It and they are very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
Comment from jenintorre
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This poem has brought tears to my eyes. I can feel your grief through your poignant words. I am so sorry for your loss. Treasure your happy memories. Love and hugs. Jen.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi Jen,
    Thank you for your review it is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
Comment from themundanegirl
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Good Morning,

This is a very beautifully written emotional poem. Loss is never easy to cope with. I lost my father a couple years ago and I found peace in writing, I hope that you can do the same.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi themundanegirl,
    Thank you for your review it is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
Comment from amada
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Chris, please accept my condolences. Your brother Jim was very much loved on earth and I am sure he knows it. Your words are loving and accepting, he will never be forgotten.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi amada,
    Thank you for your review it is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
reply by amada on 08-Nov-2020
    Share his memory, dear Christine...My brother passed away many years ago, we lost contact during the years...i miss him.
Comment from nomi338
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This beautiful poem/letter reminds me of when my sister died. She was the elder of the two of us and she always dominated me. I used to resent her domination although it was not mean spirited. I just hated being dominated. I said some unkind things to her after we became adults and did not communicate with her that often. Later in life she did some things for me and my wife's family that were incredibly loving and refused to accept any kind of payment. I wrote my first book as a gift to her that I was sure she would not refuse to accept. Sadly she passed away about a month before the book was published, so she never got the chance to see it. I so regret the distance that allowed to come between us, but can do nothing to address now. Your poem/letter hit me hard because it reminded me of my own feelings toward my sister.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi nomi338,
    Thank you for your review it is very much appreciate
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls

    Sorry for you loss also
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
reply by nomi338 on 08-Nov-2020
    I grieve with you over your incredible loss. I do not know your religion, but the Bible offers some comfort in the sense that the day is promised for a time in the future where the dead will be resurrected. If you are interested in finding out just let me know and I will provide you with the particular scriptures.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Christine
My deepest condolences first to you and Jim's family.
The pain and love for your brother is in every word of your writing.
I cannot say to much as enjoying a work such as this is so wrong to say.
But understanding your sorrow seems to be a better word.
Take care of yourself.
Regards and again condolences
Mary

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
    Hi MaryThank you for your review and six stars They are very much appreciated
    I am sorry for my late reply but I was attending
    my brothers funeral this week. My husband and I
    needed to travel over 1500kls interstate to attend
    under difficult Quarantine requirements.
    However with much hassle we arrived the day before
    Jim had a beautiful funeral service
    and I was privileged to do his eulogy
    Then we had to come straight home another 1500kls
    I will miss my brother very much

    Christine 7/11/2020
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