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Comment from Y. M. Roger
BIG fan of gummy bears over here! :) ;) Congrats on second place, L! ;) This was definitely the tightest competition the Stack has ever seen - hooray! Thank you so much for joining in the Sweet Stack this time and enjoy your sugar rush! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
BIG fan of gummy bears over here! :) ;) Congrats on second place, L! ;) This was definitely the tightest competition the Stack has ever seen - hooray! Thank you so much for joining in the Sweet Stack this time and enjoy your sugar rush! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much...it was fun.
Comment from Stephen Force
Excellent, I am a big fan of 5-7-5 poetry your stacking four and keeping them confined to the same topic is both impressive and creative. I like that you also gummy bear colored the stanza's. Nice!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
Excellent, I am a big fan of 5-7-5 poetry your stacking four and keeping them confined to the same topic is both impressive and creative. I like that you also gummy bear colored the stanza's. Nice!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the 5/7/5 sweet stack. I have never liked gummies but my husband loves them so we have them around sometimes. This is well written and should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
This is an excellent entry for the 5/7/5 sweet stack. I have never liked gummies but my husband loves them so we have them around sometimes. This is well written and should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This put a big smile on my face. I love the reverence to candy! Very enjoyable. This was a fun poem with wonderful word choices and a light and fun feel. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
This put a big smile on my face. I love the reverence to candy! Very enjoyable. This was a fun poem with wonderful word choices and a light and fun feel. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank You!