Sorry, don't like stinky cheese
Its an acquired taste18 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
A really cute poem! I hear ya! My son and I visited Germany several years back. We stayed with exchange students family's who had lived a year each with us. At one boy's home they had this neat pan with little drawers all along it. You opened your drawer and put in whatever you liked. We had meat and cheese. I put some meat and a bit of cheese that I had no idea what it was. It was the worst tasting and worst smelling thing I had ever tasted. I jumped up from the table and ran for water! The entire family laughed until we were all almost in tears. That was twenty years ago and when I speak with him or his mother, we always have to revisit that hilarious memory! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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A really cute poem! I hear ya! My son and I visited Germany several years back. We stayed with exchange students family's who had lived a year each with us. At one boy's home they had this neat pan with little drawers all along it. You opened your drawer and put in whatever you liked. We had meat and cheese. I put some meat and a bit of cheese that I had no idea what it was. It was the worst tasting and worst smelling thing I had ever tasted. I jumped up from the table and ran for water! The entire family laughed until we were all almost in tears. That was twenty years ago and when I speak with him or his mother, we always have to revisit that hilarious memory! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hi Patty, hope I did'nt bring back to much bad memory. My uncle did the same to me when I was a kid with some limburger, I never forgave him for that! :>)
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a funny poem and a strong entry in the contest.
You seem to be quite knowledgable about cheeses. My favorite is swiss; I'm disappointed when restaurants don't stock it or run out.
I wonder if you can tell a cheese-eater's personality by the cheese he/she chooses. Interesting study, that. :)
Nice work and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This is a funny poem and a strong entry in the contest.
You seem to be quite knowledgable about cheeses. My favorite is swiss; I'm disappointed when restaurants don't stock it or run out.
I wonder if you can tell a cheese-eater's personality by the cheese he/she chooses. Interesting study, that. :)
Nice work and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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I would think you probably can. My uncle was the meanest guy in our family, I could'nt stand him, and he liked linburger. Thats proof enough for me. :>)
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LOL
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the "Not funny, but funny" contest. I think you have small typo you might want to fix: The doctor's a fable meaning the doctor is a fable. But I certainly liked your poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the "Not funny, but funny" contest. I think you have small typo you might want to fix: The doctor's a fable meaning the doctor is a fable. But I certainly liked your poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks, will fix that. Thankyou for the review.
Comment from lyenochka
Is Harold in the bathroom after too much cheese? This is a cute poem with a fun series of limerick stanzas. Hope you do well in the contest!
Suggestion:
"The doctors a fable" (doctor's) for contraction of "doctor is"
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Is Harold in the bathroom after too much cheese? This is a cute poem with a fun series of limerick stanzas. Hope you do well in the contest!
Suggestion:
"The doctors a fable" (doctor's) for contraction of "doctor is"
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review. Yep, poor harold took one for the team, with that last cheese, voted worst there is.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the different cheeses and levels if smell seems to make the stinkiest cheeces the most valued. I stick to my normal cheese sweet milk, gouda or cheddar.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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A very well-written poem about the different cheeses and levels if smell seems to make the stinkiest cheeces the most valued. I stick to my normal cheese sweet milk, gouda or cheddar.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Much appreciate for your review. I'm sticking with your cheeses for sure. Once tried Limburger, I can still remember that taste. :>(
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
Not funny but funny writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny and true for many people.
I like some of the stinky cheeses lol
Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
Not funny but funny writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny and true for many people.
I like some of the stinky cheeses lol
Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Yeah, I threw some falsely accused in there, like Brie, but I needed the ryhme, but cheddar and swiss is my fav. Thanks for the review.
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Yes, I threw some innocents in there like Brie, needed the rhyme, but Swiss and Cheddar are great. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This funny limerick suite, Sorry, Don't Like Stinky Cheese, has the proper formatting and shows that the body has a self-preservation mechanism that suggests that cheese has crossed over from dairy to -- Damn!
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This funny limerick suite, Sorry, Don't Like Stinky Cheese, has the proper formatting and shows that the body has a self-preservation mechanism that suggests that cheese has crossed over from dairy to -- Damn!
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review Bill. Yep, there's something that has to be overcome to eat the strong cheeses. I never got there myself.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This made me laugh out loud. Well the line about smelling like s__t. This is a funny and creative poem. I love how you used a little bit of history - when it's real it makes it even funnier. Very funny and well written.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This made me laugh out loud. Well the line about smelling like s__t. This is a funny and creative poem. I love how you used a little bit of history - when it's real it makes it even funnier. Very funny and well written.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks Michael, Much appreciated. I was worried, I did'nt want the cheese lovers after me. Actually I like the stuff?well some of it. :>)
