Last Dance
5-7-5 November4 total reviews
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Beautifully written with excellent description of what is taking place. The full moon which lightens the landscape in a soft serene silver beams. Your excellent background enhances the written words of your wonderful 5-7-5 contest entry. Good luck!!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Beautifully written with excellent description of what is taking place. The full moon which lightens the landscape in a soft serene silver beams. Your excellent background enhances the written words of your wonderful 5-7-5 contest entry. Good luck!!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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JIM!!!!!!!! thank you
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Absolutely stunning vision in mind's eye gifted by your eloquently chosen words. This is beautifully enhanced by the art you chose to accompany this 5/7/5! Truly love it.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Absolutely stunning vision in mind's eye gifted by your eloquently chosen words. This is beautifully enhanced by the art you chose to accompany this 5/7/5! Truly love it.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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AWWWW you just made my day! Thank you kindly for sending me such sweet words! :-))) Smiling on the cold and rainy day.
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You are so welcome. I remember you from my past membership here! You are very gifted and a pleasure to read.
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Susanne! Are you back on here again? I am so pleased to see you!
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Hello Susan...yes, dear, I am back on...taking my time grinding the gears again, but making them work! My precious Eternal Muse is once again directing me in the right direction or I would be writing some pretty nasty things (lol). Looking so forward to reading you again....
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-Effective personification
in line two and the theme
of the dance in the concluding
line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-Effective personification
in line two and the theme
of the dance in the concluding
line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Aw Thank you so much :-)
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You are very welcome, Susan.
Comment from WalkerMan
This 5-7-5 is just right for November, when leaves of all colors are losing grip on their branches, especially in the chill of the night. You found the perfect illustration for your words. Yes, the twirling of falling leaves does resemble a pirouette in dance; and it is indeed their last dance before they accumulate on the ground to become mulch to insulate shallow tree roots from the cold of winter and return nutrients to the soil. You vividly show us here how beautifully wise is the cycle of life. Superb.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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This 5-7-5 is just right for November, when leaves of all colors are losing grip on their branches, especially in the chill of the night. You found the perfect illustration for your words. Yes, the twirling of falling leaves does resemble a pirouette in dance; and it is indeed their last dance before they accumulate on the ground to become mulch to insulate shallow tree roots from the cold of winter and return nutrients to the soil. You vividly show us here how beautifully wise is the cycle of life. Superb.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you for another amazing review!!
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You are most welcome, Susan. Even your short poems are exceptional. :))
