The Sadness of Quiet
Remembering Zoe98 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words to be sad, descriptive, clear and creative.
I pondered on the theme of these words and thought about the grief these
words revealed to me. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
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I found the author's words to be sad, descriptive, clear and creative.
I pondered on the theme of these words and thought about the grief these
words revealed to me. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank You, for taking the time.
Comment from royowen
My wife and I were discussing this very subject this morning, and either of us could be the first to go. But those friends of ours who have lost their partners suffer. This is both profoundly written and very honest, beautifully written and stated, well done, blessings Roy
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My wife and I were discussing this very subject this morning, and either of us could be the first to go. But those friends of ours who have lost their partners suffer. This is both profoundly written and very honest, beautifully written and stated, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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you are very kind, Thank you.
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Most welcome
Comment from chatterbox1
Oh, I pray this isn't true for you. The sadness. The grief. The
"Love undervalued
Time overlooked."
So, so true! I recently lost my son, so grief is no stranger.
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Oh, I pray this isn't true for you. The sadness. The grief. The
"Love undervalued
Time overlooked."
So, so true! I recently lost my son, so grief is no stranger.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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It is true 45 years together I am sorry about your son, we never had children, but I have heard others say it is the hardest grief to bear. Thank You.
Comment from nomi338
As we continue to mourn our dead friends and family members, we look upon the places they once occupied and try to remember them. We hold on to whatever memories we can salvage, but as time passes, it becomes ever more difficult. Today we have the blessing of video to capture them and we are able to replay their presence, still it not sufficient, as you cannot hug an image.
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As we continue to mourn our dead friends and family members, we look upon the places they once occupied and try to remember them. We hold on to whatever memories we can salvage, but as time passes, it becomes ever more difficult. Today we have the blessing of video to capture them and we are able to replay their presence, still it not sufficient, as you cannot hug an image.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Sir, you are very right, Thank You.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm so sorry about your loss. You have expressed your feeling very well in this poem. Yes. Now the fallowing lines are so true:
Love undervalued
Time overlooked.
We should use every minute to love our loved ones.
Thanks for the lesson.
Well done.
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I'm so sorry about your loss. You have expressed your feeling very well in this poem. Yes. Now the fallowing lines are so true:
Love undervalued
Time overlooked.
We should use every minute to love our loved ones.
Thanks for the lesson.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Sadly, I learned the the lesson the hard way. Thank You.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'The Sadness of Quiet', is a well-written and heart-wrenching piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
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'The Sadness of Quiet', is a well-written and heart-wrenching piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank You.
You're welcome!
Comment from pookietoo
What a sad poem, and a great entry in the no rules poetry contest. No joy. Only sadness and the quiet. I hope you enjoy life and have a wonderful night.
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What a sad poem, and a great entry in the no rules poetry contest. No joy. Only sadness and the quiet. I hope you enjoy life and have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
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Thank You.
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Welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a beautiful poem of the sadness of loss. I've been there, too. It's not until they have slipped away that we realise we have lost the one person who was always there, and how much we took for granted. We always think there will be another tomorrow. It's comes as a shock to find out how wrong we were. I like the way you have written this, the short, sharp lines punch home the sadness and grief. I'm sorry for your loss, Terry. Those last two lines say so much. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
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This is a beautiful poem of the sadness of loss. I've been there, too. It's not until they have slipped away that we realise we have lost the one person who was always there, and how much we took for granted. We always think there will be another tomorrow. It's comes as a shock to find out how wrong we were. I like the way you have written this, the short, sharp lines punch home the sadness and grief. I'm sorry for your loss, Terry. Those last two lines say so much. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
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Thank You for the wonderful review.
Comment from rockinm76233
I read your comments on my poem and then I came to read some of your poetry. Very good, grief long endures and never leaves, just fades a bit so we can go on living.
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I read your comments on my poem and then I came to read some of your poetry. Very good, grief long endures and never leaves, just fades a bit so we can go on living.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank You. In a very few weeks it will be three years, I know that there is no time limit of grief. Thank you for taking the time.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a sad and poignant poem. It is also quite beautiful. I think it touches the heart of anyone who has suffered such a loss. I don't know why it is so easy to take for granted people we love when we know the fragility of life. I think it's human nature. I'm sorry for your loss.
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This is a sad and poignant poem. It is also quite beautiful. I think it touches the heart of anyone who has suffered such a loss. I don't know why it is so easy to take for granted people we love when we know the fragility of life. I think it's human nature. I'm sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
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Thank You
