CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Embracing the Light"A collection of poetry
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Comment from dportwood
Too many times family, being what they think is brutally honest, begets dark feeling from the negative side. Your sonnet style is enjoyable and my pleasure to have reviewed.
Good luck.
Duane
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Too many times family, being what they think is brutally honest, begets dark feeling from the negative side. Your sonnet style is enjoyable and my pleasure to have reviewed.
Good luck.
Duane
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from wierdgrace
This is wonderful, I enjoyed it all and it has been a while since I have read anything, my desktop has a terrible viris, and my laptap is okay, but Just getting better. great reading as all your poems, thanks you for sharing.
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This is wonderful, I enjoyed it all and it has been a while since I have read anything, my desktop has a terrible viris, and my laptap is okay, but Just getting better. great reading as all your poems, thanks you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
loved the title; this is a message every one needs to "get".
well written; strong contest entry; great presentation too; best wishes in the voting booth!
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loved the title; this is a message every one needs to "get".
well written; strong contest entry; great presentation too; best wishes in the voting booth!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from EdwardVal
You have a wonderful piece of poetry here my friend and this was very beautifully written. You have followed the contest rules however do note that you used exact rhyme and none exact. overall well enjoyed, take care
E'Val
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You have a wonderful piece of poetry here my friend and this was very beautifully written. You have followed the contest rules however do note that you used exact rhyme and none exact. overall well enjoyed, take care
E'Val
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sue...this is an excellent poem with a good message about life and its lessons. Written in sonnet form works well here. A little tweaking of the iambics and this could be a fine sonnet. Well done...good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
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Hi Sue...this is an excellent poem with a good message about life and its lessons. Written in sonnet form works well here. A little tweaking of the iambics and this could be a fine sonnet. Well done...good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from raw form
I think this is a very cool poem because no one can influence or push our buttons worse than family and I felt your vibe on this Six, you made me think of where I dont want to go. Good stuff
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I think this is a very cool poem because no one can influence or push our buttons worse than family and I felt your vibe on this Six, you made me think of where I dont want to go. Good stuff
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Just2Write
Negativity is far more contagious than happiness. Your life lesson poem teaches us, that to break free of negative influences, we must choose not to think as others do. Especially family. It's hard, but worth the effort, if one can rise above the din and look for the silver lining, when all about them are clouds.
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Negativity is far more contagious than happiness. Your life lesson poem teaches us, that to break free of negative influences, we must choose not to think as others do. Especially family. It's hard, but worth the effort, if one can rise above the din and look for the silver lining, when all about them are clouds.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
What a great philosophy. I wrote a column years ago about this very thing. We must be on the same wave length. Your poem says it very well. Take your own advice, it's very good. You kept the rhyme and ended with a good lesson learned. Goodluck
Delora
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What a great philosophy. I wrote a column years ago about this very thing. We must be on the same wave length. Your poem says it very well. Take your own advice, it's very good. You kept the rhyme and ended with a good lesson learned. Goodluck
Delora
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Hi Sue - You've done very nice job with this one. A valuable lesson and the poem meets all of the requirements of the contest. A good choice of photos to illustrate your words.
have a great day - sherry
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Hi Sue - You've done very nice job with this one. A valuable lesson and the poem meets all of the requirements of the contest. A good choice of photos to illustrate your words.
have a great day - sherry
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from prodigal
I think you have a good message here. Allot of people don't realize the distruction they are doing to themselves by being negative. I would much rather spend time with a positive person than a negative one. Very good life lesson. Good luck in the contest.
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I think you have a good message here. Allot of people don't realize the distruction they are doing to themselves by being negative. I would much rather spend time with a positive person than a negative one. Very good life lesson. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009