CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "In Shatters"A collection of poetry
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Comment from LadyMary
Excellent both in form and in what is expressed. Oh, how words can cut! Your point is well made and the vocabulary chosen is perfect. LadyMary
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Excellent both in form and in what is expressed. Oh, how words can cut! Your point is well made and the vocabulary chosen is perfect. LadyMary
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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LadyMary, So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your kind words and your very generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from justmade
Words can cut deeper than sharp objects depending how and when it is used.
You said it right in this poem and very intelligently too. I respect that.
Another well written piece.
Much love,
Justmade.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Words can cut deeper than sharp objects depending how and when it is used.
You said it right in this poem and very intelligently too. I respect that.
Another well written piece.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Justmade, thank you very much for your generous review and comments. So glad you enjoyed! With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Eternal Muse
Excellent Tetractys, and excellent rendition of hurt. Very much enjoyed this piece and your choice of the artwork, and double Tetractus works even better!
It is so true, when speaking about emotional wounds inflicted:
as we flinch
from their
sounds.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Excellent Tetractys, and excellent rendition of hurt. Very much enjoyed this piece and your choice of the artwork, and double Tetractus works even better!
It is so true, when speaking about emotional wounds inflicted:
as we flinch
from their
sounds.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Yeltel, thank you most kindly for your very generous review. So glad you enjoyed this piece. And thank you for highlighting the words you liked. Much appreciated with my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from fayesh
This mirrored tetractys was nicely done with a extended metaphor that was carried brilliantly all the way to the end. You have found your niche in poetry.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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This mirrored tetractys was nicely done with a extended metaphor that was carried brilliantly all the way to the end. You have found your niche in poetry.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Fayesh, you do know that you know have me hooked on tetractys! Ha! Wow, I really enjoyed sitting down to pen this. Really stretched and challenged me. Of course, your review on this is most special. With my kindest regards, Sue
Comment from kassey
Excellent double - tetractys. The theme of words and how much damage they can do is great. I particularly liked the line:
"shards may be removed, yet the burn till seethes. Excellent first attempt Kay
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Excellent double - tetractys. The theme of words and how much damage they can do is great. I particularly liked the line:
"shards may be removed, yet the burn till seethes. Excellent first attempt Kay
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Kassey, I really appreciate your very generous review and comments. Thanks so much for highlighting the words that resonated with you. Much appreciated and with kindest regards, Sue
Comment from CHIDOZIE
Wounding with words caused all the wars that had ever been fought in the history of man. The diction is evocative and brings the message of the poem very close to the reader. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Wounding with words caused all the wars that had ever been fought in the history of man. The diction is evocative and brings the message of the poem very close to the reader. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Thank you so much for your very generous review and comments. So happy your enjoyed. Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
Comment from skye
Truly excellent. The form is wonderful and the content exceptional.
I love the metaphor you used, of a wound and the words to let the reader know how deep it goes.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Truly excellent. The form is wonderful and the content exceptional.
I love the metaphor you used, of a wound and the words to let the reader know how deep it goes.
Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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Skye, thank you so much for your very generous review and comments. I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Very appreciated and with regards, Sue
Comment from wierdgrace
sommany of of do this with even trying, hurting ourselves and others. this is a excellent poem with no errors and has so much emotions and no much to say, i love it. thank you for sharing this,
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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sommany of of do this with even trying, hurting ourselves and others. this is a excellent poem with no errors and has so much emotions and no much to say, i love it. thank you for sharing this,
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2008
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grace, thank you so very much for your very generous review and lovely comments! I am now in love with tetractys! So glad you enjoyed this. With warmest regards, Sue
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you are so welcome
Comment from Kingsland
I like poetry that move the soul such as this did for me. There was nothing to dislike about this well written verse
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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I like poetry that move the soul such as this did for me. There was nothing to dislike about this well written verse
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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John, I am so pleased that you liked this piece. Was from my heart and soul. I thank you for your very generous review and most kind words. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Are you showing off now friend? A very strong and thought provoking poem you have presented there friend, I think it is really GREAT, I'm going to have to bookcase it because because I would like to have a go at one at some point. Thank you for sharing Sue.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Are you showing off now friend? A very strong and thought provoking poem you have presented there friend, I think it is really GREAT, I'm going to have to bookcase it because because I would like to have a go at one at some point. Thank you for sharing Sue.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Please DO go for it! It is a very deep process of meting out each word for its perfect fit to tell the story. I love free flow writing and on the opposite spectrum, I am loving these restrictive formats which reign your mind in. Thank you for your awesome review and great comments. Yours sincerely, Sue