Unconditional Love
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
I really like the sentiment that you expressed in this writing. I believe that dogs are a simple way of God expressing unconditional love for us that helps add enjoyment to our lives. Thanks for this excellent reminder!
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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I really like the sentiment that you expressed in this writing. I believe that dogs are a simple way of God expressing unconditional love for us that helps add enjoyment to our lives. Thanks for this excellent reminder!
Bill
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Bill, thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so very right...and you are so very welcome...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I've always said that an excellent example of the unconditional love that God has given to us to walk in is our dogs. I'm not an abuser of animals, I'm quite the opposite. I've seen them abused and tortured horribly, but, they still reach out to be loved even by there abusers. The Lord wants to teach us something through this. If you're tortured, abused, and mistreated, like Jesus and some dogs are, we are to love anyway. I love the powerful message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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I've always said that an excellent example of the unconditional love that God has given to us to walk in is our dogs. I'm not an abuser of animals, I'm quite the opposite. I've seen them abused and tortured horribly, but, they still reach out to be loved even by there abusers. The Lord wants to teach us something through this. If you're tortured, abused, and mistreated, like Jesus and some dogs are, we are to love anyway. I love the powerful message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Jeffery, thank you for an amazing review...I am a true lover of animals...I pray every night for God to keep them out of pain...away from their abusers...thank you...
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is such a innocent idea of us being created as loyal pups and have this life as a gift or God. I know is not what you intended but this is how I feel it. I really like it your 5-7-5 is quite original:" loyal pup, God's Gift
pure as the soft driven snow
you were created" Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is such a innocent idea of us being created as loyal pups and have this life as a gift or God. I know is not what you intended but this is how I feel it. I really like it your 5-7-5 is quite original:" loyal pup, God's Gift
pure as the soft driven snow
you were created" Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Iza, thank you so much for a wonderful review....you are close in your idea...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...and God Bless...
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You are welcome and good luck with the contest.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well written 575 poem about the unconditional love God has for everyone of us, human or animal, He created us all. The little He asks from us seem too much in our minds. It costs nothing to have faith and believe His word.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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A very well written 575 poem about the unconditional love God has for everyone of us, human or animal, He created us all. The little He asks from us seem too much in our minds. It costs nothing to have faith and believe His word.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Sandra, thank you for a wonderful review...and you are so right...God has unconditional love you us all...human or animal...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Thursday to you fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Happy Thursday to you fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi 13thpoet, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and thank for the good luck... you are so very welcome...
Comment from Mistydawn
Your artwork is gorgeous, brought a smile to my face. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice gets your message across nicely. Let's readers see how precious fury babies can be. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Your artwork is gorgeous, brought a smile to my face. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice gets your message across nicely. Let's readers see how precious fury babies can be. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Mistydawn, I love the artwork as well...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I glad it put a smile on your face...thank you...
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. Your theme plays nicely off the emotions of the voting public by incorporating both a puppy and a spiritual theme. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. Your theme plays nicely off the emotions of the voting public by incorporating both a puppy and a spiritual theme. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Angel, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...and your so welcome....