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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Superman was always my favorite hero, too. You never had to guess who's side he was on, or if he was a good guy or bad guy. Now days, it's hard to tell.
Cute picture--reminds me of my son when he was little.

Rhonda

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
    So true very hard to find noble people one can trust. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
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I, at first, questioned whether you were created a broken English or if that was your style. By looking at previous work I see you are consistent. The poem describes the persona of Superman as we typically see him. He is humble, though powerful, kind, even when he is oppressed by the enemies of truth and justice, and able to hold down a job. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
    Yeah I suffer pits in my write but love conveying thoughts hopefully of interests. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from foxangie123
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What a powerful and entertaining poem. Way to go on this as it is more than fantastic indeed. I always thought of him as Jesus. Most fabulous writing here. Genius....

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
    Glad this write found interests. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging inspiration about this write.