Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
Another well written chapter. I really feel for Steven you portray his hurt well. In fact i feel for both of them as it's obvious Leya does love him
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Another well written chapter. I really feel for Steven you portray his hurt well. In fact i feel for both of them as it's obvious Leya does love him
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Leya is in big trouble this time. Thank you for your review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Hmmmmm. I don't understand why Steven was so upset that Leya notified her family that she was no longer a virgin.
Good job!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Hmmmmm. I don't understand why Steven was so upset that Leya notified her family that she was no longer a virgin.
Good job!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Steven views Leya as using him, because she tried to seduce him from the beginning just so shew wouldn't have to marry Carlos. Steven thinks she's up to her old tricks. Thank you for your review.
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Ah, so! Yes, that explains it.
Comment from adewpearl
Barbara, well, that wasn't a long, happy honeymoon, now was it? She has a lot of explaining to do. I'm dying to hear the explanation, too, though it sounds like she'll have to work overtime to make Steven listen to whatever it is. You sure make him sound furious and her sound anguished. Trouble in paradise :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Barbara, well, that wasn't a long, happy honeymoon, now was it? She has a lot of explaining to do. I'm dying to hear the explanation, too, though it sounds like she'll have to work overtime to make Steven listen to whatever it is. You sure make him sound furious and her sound anguished. Trouble in paradise :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Leya really blew is this time. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Arkine
Hmmm, well this is certainly an interesting twist. I would have thought he'd be happy about her notifying them ... but, I guess it all does go on record so his career is iffy now. What a tangled web.
When he had no(t) luck, he called - remove
Carlos Martinez, her former fianc(©). - Evil Eddie
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Hmmm, well this is certainly an interesting twist. I would have thought he'd be happy about her notifying them ... but, I guess it all does go on record so his career is iffy now. What a tangled web.
When he had no(t) luck, he called - remove
Carlos Martinez, her former fianc(©). - Evil Eddie
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Well, Steven thinks Leya is up to her old tricks and simply used him just so she wouldn't have to marry Carlos. Thank you for your review.
Comment from c_lucas
Some men's anger block out the reason for what they think is betrayal This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. A visit from Evil Eddie.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Some men's anger block out the reason for what they think is betrayal This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. A visit from Evil Eddie.
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Where is the visit from Evil Eddie? I will check it out. Thank you for your review.
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Seek and you shall find. I know you can do it. Your're welcome, Barbara. Charlie