CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
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Comment from sara-beth
I like this, "wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius" is a great line. If only one could give that canvas what it wanted! Very good, very enjoyable.
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I like this, "wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius" is a great line. If only one could give that canvas what it wanted! Very good, very enjoyable.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from writerjen
Very good Naani poem contest entry. Followed the requirements well. Nice photograph along with the poem. Good descriptive language. well done.
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Very good Naani poem contest entry. Followed the requirements well. Nice photograph along with the poem. Good descriptive language. well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from nora arjuna
hi there, you have composed a great Naani here. your title made me curious and i enjoyed its contents. all the best to you in the contest.
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hi there, you have composed a great Naani here. your title made me curious and i enjoyed its contents. all the best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from Josipher32
This was a correctly written naani poem. You followed the format correctly by staying within a topic with 21 syllables. Perfect picture to accompany your piece.--Kristen
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This was a correctly written naani poem. You followed the format correctly by staying within a topic with 21 syllables. Perfect picture to accompany your piece.--Kristen
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from bard owl
This is an excellent contest entry. Michelangelo used to say that a figure was waiting inside the stone to be freed by his hands. All art is like that, whether the medium is painting, words, music, sculpture - beauty waiting to be born. You did a spectacular job with very few words. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
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This is an excellent contest entry. Michelangelo used to say that a figure was waiting inside the stone to be freed by his hands. All art is like that, whether the medium is painting, words, music, sculpture - beauty waiting to be born. You did a spectacular job with very few words. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
Comment from fayesh
Your use of personification was excellent. This is a real contender in the contest. You did not falter, but carried the personification all the way to the end.
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Your use of personification was excellent. This is a real contender in the contest. You did not falter, but carried the personification all the way to the end.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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This is a wonderful review that goes straight to my heart. I cannot thank you enough for letting me know how you felt about it. I am so glad you liked it! Thank you for this most esteemed review! With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Annmuma
Excellent entry. In fact, it's my favorite so far. The artist, the blank canvas, a lot of depth and creativity here. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Excellent entry. In fact, it's my favorite so far. The artist, the blank canvas, a lot of depth and creativity here. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Annmuma, thank you for your most kind words and review. So much appreciated! With regards, Sue
Comment from ulster3
Sixteezkid.
Hello. You are doing a lot of writing work. I really like this, and I'd say you've done very well. Good luck in the contest. fondly, rebecca
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Sixteezkid.
Hello. You are doing a lot of writing work. I really like this, and I'd say you've done very well. Good luck in the contest. fondly, rebecca
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Rebecca, I can't stop writing for the time being. As it is new to me, I just can't stop wanting to learn! A looongg way to go, but we all have to start somewhere! ha! Thanks so much for your great review! With Regards, Sue
Comment from mmichelle97219
Caress my page with your expert ink
Etch upon me what you will
I stand before you naked in trust
that you my soul will fill
your short smartly written piece inspires me. Well done, and good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Caress my page with your expert ink
Etch upon me what you will
I stand before you naked in trust
that you my soul will fill
your short smartly written piece inspires me. Well done, and good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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Did you just now write that piece?? It's absolutely beautiful!! Thank you for your very generous review and am so happy that you enjoyed this piece! With warmest regards, Sue
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Yes I did just write it with your poem as the inspiration. My gift to you
Michelle
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That's what I thought you were saying and I was blown away that you had an instant inspiration to write how you felt at that time. Great thing about writing! Great thing about poetry...just a few lines needed to express! Thank you so much for sharing that. You should post it....because it says so much.
Warmest regards,
Sue
Comment from skye
Beautiful poem about the inspiration. Your photo is so appropriate, the blank canvas, waiting to be filled.
I think these small, short poems are often the hardest to write.
You have done a very nice job.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Beautiful poem about the inspiration. Your photo is so appropriate, the blank canvas, waiting to be filled.
I think these small, short poems are often the hardest to write.
You have done a very nice job.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Yes, these confined poems are difficult, which makes the challenge even more fun! Thanks for your very generous review! Sue