CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
I don't think we could ever understand her world without actually experiecing a day in her shoes. She is very lucky to have you as her mother. Well written.
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I don't think we could ever understand her world without actually experiecing a day in her shoes. She is very lucky to have you as her mother. Well written.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from enjoi
Overall, considering the restrictive format and what you were going for with this poem, I think you came out with a good piece. You managed exactly what you tried for her. No errors as I saw. Good stuff.
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Overall, considering the restrictive format and what you were going for with this poem, I think you came out with a good piece. You managed exactly what you tried for her. No errors as I saw. Good stuff.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
Really great poem. Artwork is incredible. So sorry to hear your daughter has autism. For Fayesh. That's so nice. Fayesh must be special to you and I know will enjoy the dedication. Wonderful work. Seraph ~
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Really great poem. Artwork is incredible. So sorry to hear your daughter has autism. For Fayesh. That's so nice. Fayesh must be special to you and I know will enjoy the dedication. Wonderful work. Seraph ~
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from elainec4
Sixteezkid,
Thanks for introducing me to the tetractys. You have accomplished here what you set out to do--simplified the complex world of autism for the uninformed. Very effective. elaine
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Sixteezkid,
Thanks for introducing me to the tetractys. You have accomplished here what you set out to do--simplified the complex world of autism for the uninformed. Very effective. elaine
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from NightWriter
Tetractys is an interesting kind of poem I've never seen before. "An Enigma" is very creative and well written. The last sentence really sums it up, it's very hard to comprehend their different world.
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Tetractys is an interesting kind of poem I've never seen before. "An Enigma" is very creative and well written. The last sentence really sums it up, it's very hard to comprehend their different world.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from ledford
Wow! So simple and powerful a poem for such a profound disorder.
I lvoe the artwork you chose. It compliments it perfectly:-)
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Wow! So simple and powerful a poem for such a profound disorder.
I lvoe the artwork you chose. It compliments it perfectly:-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from sara-beth
You have expressed so much in these few words, it must truly be a difficult thing to comprehend. The art work you chose is perfect for the piece. Awesome!
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You have expressed so much in these few words, it must truly be a difficult thing to comprehend. The art work you chose is perfect for the piece. Awesome!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from dtimes3
Nicely done. We have an autistic young man at chrurch and he is twenty-six. I have never thought too much about older people with autism. I have worked with Down's kids, ages maybe 8 - 20 but that is a whole different thing. His mom says he is quite a handful and requires constant attention. Thanks for sharing.
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Nicely done. We have an autistic young man at chrurch and he is twenty-six. I have never thought too much about older people with autism. I have worked with Down's kids, ages maybe 8 - 20 but that is a whole different thing. His mom says he is quite a handful and requires constant attention. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from jshep
Fantastic presentation, Sixteez. Between the art and your words, Wow!. It is apparent the painting and the poem were done as a unit, and very well done, I will say. I don't think anyone can quite understand their world. Great job. Joyce
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Fantastic presentation, Sixteez. Between the art and your words, Wow!. It is apparent the painting and the poem were done as a unit, and very well done, I will say. I don't think anyone can quite understand their world. Great job. Joyce
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Rar22
Great piece, you capture much emotion and storytelling in just five lines. I love the question at the end, it definitely leaves the reader with much to ponder. Thanks for sharing.
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Great piece, you capture much emotion and storytelling in just five lines. I love the question at the end, it definitely leaves the reader with much to ponder. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008