Highway of Loathing
A Life of Drugs!90 total reviews
Comment from Akarva
I enjoyed this poem which has strong feelings about drugs and the life of people who consume drugs. The ill-effects are disastrous and you have shown that clearly in your poem. Very informative and appreciative.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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I enjoyed this poem which has strong feelings about drugs and the life of people who consume drugs. The ill-effects are disastrous and you have shown that clearly in your poem. Very informative and appreciative.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from R. K. Alan
A very dark storytelling of the affliction of addiction. You have told it well, delivering the pain and sorrow and internal hatred the abuser has for himself and his life. Ray aka R. K. Alan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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A very dark storytelling of the affliction of addiction. You have told it well, delivering the pain and sorrow and internal hatred the abuser has for himself and his life. Ray aka R. K. Alan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the review...dklrd
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Dk, yeah no doubt you write about some sorid places to live within. My best friend in life took me to a place where they were smoking crack. I didn't cause I'm kinda square but the people around me were instantly skeptical and afraid of me because I wouldn't...this reminded me of that day...not bad as far as the writing goes but, oh Lord the place you want to take your readers....xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Hello Dk, yeah no doubt you write about some sorid places to live within. My best friend in life took me to a place where they were smoking crack. I didn't cause I'm kinda square but the people around me were instantly skeptical and afraid of me because I wouldn't...this reminded me of that day...not bad as far as the writing goes but, oh Lord the place you want to take your readers....xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from Chris Tee
Very striking!! I made me utter a grunt Uh!! When I finished the read it makes you think what hell some young kids stroll into and why?? I hope you are not into drugs???
Very descriptive and well written!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Very striking!! I made me utter a grunt Uh!! When I finished the read it makes you think what hell some young kids stroll into and why?? I hope you are not into drugs???
Very descriptive and well written!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review....dklrd
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Dklrdmcches
A powerful statement I think of the despair of addiction and the waste of a persons life as it slowly destroys them from within. Very well written, though I'd suggest using a different colour for the text - it may just be my eyes or my screen, but dark red on black is difficult to read!
Patrick
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Hi Dklrdmcches
A powerful statement I think of the despair of addiction and the waste of a persons life as it slowly destroys them from within. Very well written, though I'd suggest using a different colour for the text - it may just be my eyes or my screen, but dark red on black is difficult to read!
Patrick
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from bbowen6757
A trip to the 'dark side', very well written, I like this line:
'shaking from the down that is upon me, I scour the couch for my next high.'
I would think that would be a very apt description.
Bobby
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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A trip to the 'dark side', very well written, I like this line:
'shaking from the down that is upon me, I scour the couch for my next high.'
I would think that would be a very apt description.
Bobby
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from Espresso momma
This nearly killed my oldest son, I hate to read this each time and then I pray like in the poem,God save him from this despair that swallows his very soul, once again. I am glad I stopped to read and pray.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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This nearly killed my oldest son, I hate to read this each time and then I pray like in the poem,God save him from this despair that swallows his very soul, once again. I am glad I stopped to read and pray.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Tank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from ameen786
You certainly live upto your image of haunt, frieght; you painted a vivid picture of a disease that so many youths are addicted to, great use of vocabulary making it a horrific read, glad it's not real. Powerful write, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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You certainly live upto your image of haunt, frieght; you painted a vivid picture of a disease that so many youths are addicted to, great use of vocabulary making it a horrific read, glad it's not real. Powerful write, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from Lise Deangelo
I think its 'serum' not 'syrum'. I like 'Shaking from the down that is upon me' This is quite a disturbibg and dark poem, but what else could it be? I thought you wrote it very well. Thanks for sharing. Lise
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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I think its 'serum' not 'syrum'. I like 'Shaking from the down that is upon me' This is quite a disturbibg and dark poem, but what else could it be? I thought you wrote it very well. Thanks for sharing. Lise
Comment Written 24-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
Comment from Haggard
This piece was very deep indeed. It is never easy to cease the cravings for such a substance. Reading this, I know it must be hard for you, but believe that everything happens for a reason, and believe in recovery.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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This piece was very deep indeed. It is never easy to cease the cravings for such a substance. Reading this, I know it must be hard for you, but believe that everything happens for a reason, and believe in recovery.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the kind review...dklrd
