Comment from demelzadreamer

Excellent

Short sweet and to the point. love it. Easy to understand. Great job and coolio picture. Good luck with all of your writing.

I am, yours most sincerely,
DemelzaDreamer

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from findingmyroom

Excellent

There's something hard about writing these extremely short pieces, yet you manage to make them shine! Nice job with the bridge imagery.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

Well done. You fit the criteria for the competition and the message is profound. Like you say Hope is a bridge we all need to cross when things go wrong. Good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from Mike K2

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem and feel it is a fine entry. I is well written and makes an excellent point. It applies to Wall Street as well. LOL

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

And our economy as a whole, hopefully!!! We need one helluva huge bridge! Thanks for your great review. Sue :-)

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

I think you did a good job with this, Excellent This a wonderful story beautifully worded, a good job and a remarkable piece Rich imagery there were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A beautiful uplifting poem
of reaching that darkest of
hours, and then that bridge
of hope that takes many shapes
for the heart to cross over
into the light.
Two lines of majesty artistically
written.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from Judian James

Excellent

Wow. What a bonanza payout for such a quick read! Thanks
These short ones are always tricky with the editor. This says a lot, as it should, in very few words. "Hope it the thing with feathers that perches in the soul" E.Dickinson
well done Sue and so generous of you as well

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Sue, Good essence form in syllables, inner rhyme and end-line rhyme, and I like the symbolism of hope as a bridge after a loss in life - all around, a strong contest entry. Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am amazed at how profound the thought is in this tiny poem. The bridge metaphor is lovely and surrounded by lovely. You once again found the perfect picture to accompany your work. This is a contest winner.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

Comment from Diane Marie

Excellent

I am forever intrigued by these short but enjoyeable poems. Yours is lovely and uplifting. The artwork work compliments it wonderfully.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009