CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from prodigal
I am still pretty new to this type of writing. The syllable count works out good. Fate ties in well with the statement Life's proof that nothing is assured. I think this is an excellent post. Well done-Sam
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I am still pretty new to this type of writing. The syllable count works out good. Fate ties in well with the statement Life's proof that nothing is assured. I think this is an excellent post. Well done-Sam
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Sue, you did a very nice job on this pyramid poem. I know that must be challenging. The last line really hit me "Life's proof that nothing is assured" This is probably the most real sentence in my life. I have been through so many ups and downs and I live each day. I know that there are no guarantees.
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Sue, you did a very nice job on this pyramid poem. I know that must be challenging. The last line really hit me "Life's proof that nothing is assured" This is probably the most real sentence in my life. I have been through so many ups and downs and I live each day. I know that there are no guarantees.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from ToniaMichelle
Very interesting choice of art. It compliments the poem very well. I love the message in this poem. It makes life sound refreshing and exciting. Good job!
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Very interesting choice of art. It compliments the poem very well. I love the message in this poem. It makes life sound refreshing and exciting. Good job!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Minglement
You do so well at these clarity pyramids. Hard to find fault with any of this one as well. The first stanza is a nice setup and I love the last line. Good luck.
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You do so well at these clarity pyramids. Hard to find fault with any of this one as well. The first stanza is a nice setup and I love the last line. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from rama devi
An excellent clarity pysramid. It is thought provoking...love the closing line. Well presented with awesome artwork.
Wish you best of luck dear Sue.
Today I will go to ashram again. WIll be back next week. Take care.
Love, rama devi
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2009
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An excellent clarity pysramid. It is thought provoking...love the closing line. Well presented with awesome artwork.
Wish you best of luck dear Sue.
Today I will go to ashram again. WIll be back next week. Take care.
Love, rama devi
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2009
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Peace to you during ashram. Thank you for your lovely review. Sue