CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Simon Ruddle
Sixteezkid,
Hey, I like the painting - got a real 3D feel that jumps out at you.
Tangible Hope is alright by me, but I am not a very romantic person so don't take what I say to heart- for me 'art is science made flesh'
I am more of a NeuSachlichkeit (Dix, Grosz,Beckmann,Scholz, Grossman,Schad) than a Nolde,Macke,Blaue Rider sort (check 'em out on the net - if you wish to see what I'm talking about)
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Sixteezkid,
Hey, I like the painting - got a real 3D feel that jumps out at you.
Tangible Hope is alright by me, but I am not a very romantic person so don't take what I say to heart- for me 'art is science made flesh'
I am more of a NeuSachlichkeit (Dix, Grosz,Beckmann,Scholz, Grossman,Schad) than a Nolde,Macke,Blaue Rider sort (check 'em out on the net - if you wish to see what I'm talking about)
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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When giving a four star, it means "Work Needed". Can you give me any specifics as to where it is needed? The only comment I received from you was that romance wasn't your thing. Would appreciate your response. With regards, Sue
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Oh 'ell - alright Five Stars then - I gave three to someone earlier, and he said 'What a fantastic review' - its what the reviewer says that matters - not the star rating- I have to give it a rating else it won't send- It isn't my addendum that 'work is needed' - just the sites. Good is alright - better than 'average' Ja?
Comment from BethShelby
This is a well written and meaningful poem. It is easy to read and understand. I especially like the third verse and the line "clouds emptied with the rain" It expresses new hope.
I like the way you have it displayed. The art is appropriate.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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This is a well written and meaningful poem. It is easy to read and understand. I especially like the third verse and the line "clouds emptied with the rain" It expresses new hope.
I like the way you have it displayed. The art is appropriate.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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BethShelby, thank you for pointing out the phrase you liked. Always good to know. And thank you for your very kind review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
I am sorry you are not feeling well. I really liked this piece as it is a true demonstration of your creativity. There hadn't appeared to be any room for improvement.
The Rivaling Mimic
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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I am sorry you are not feeling well. I really liked this piece as it is a true demonstration of your creativity. There hadn't appeared to be any room for improvement.
The Rivaling Mimic
Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Rivaling Mimic, I had to get this poem out to help me feel better. And your very generous review and compliments make it all worth while. Very much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is a very pleasant poem with the expression of memories, feelings and hope restored and I enjoyed reading what you have written. There is nothing that I would suggest changing and I thank you for sharing it with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Hullo Sixteezkid ...
This is a very pleasant poem with the expression of memories, feelings and hope restored and I enjoyed reading what you have written. There is nothing that I would suggest changing and I thank you for sharing it with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Nanette Mary, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. And I thank you for your lovely review and compliments. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Insane Poet
This is sheer brilliance. Well written with a perfect flow.
This type of emotion can only be written after the experience of a guardian angels hand. Well Done.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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This is sheer brilliance. Well written with a perfect flow.
This type of emotion can only be written after the experience of a guardian angels hand. Well Done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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Insane Poet, I went insane for 2 days agonizing over one stanza! I'm so STOKED! Your 6'er makes my DAY! You really don't know how much. And your compliments are making my heart sing right now. Thank you for your most generous review. From my heart...Sue
Comment from prodigal
This poem is wonderful. When writing it is important to begin and end well. You did both quite eloquently. I loved the first and last sentences of this poem. Very artistic. Well done- Sam
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This poem is wonderful. When writing it is important to begin and end well. You did both quite eloquently. I loved the first and last sentences of this poem. Very artistic. Well done- Sam
Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
Comment from Jazh
I really like this poem, Sue - lovely and evocative. It flows beautifully (as usual!) and the rhymes are great. "And spoke of hope, which lies within" - says it all. You can do anything if you have hope. :)
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I really like this poem, Sue - lovely and evocative. It flows beautifully (as usual!) and the rhymes are great. "And spoke of hope, which lies within" - says it all. You can do anything if you have hope. :)
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2009
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You are so quick on the draw, that you probably saw my first "faded" image and have since changed it. No worries, as the poem is what it's all about. It just kills me how you review my work right in the middle of my post! HA! I love it. Thanks so much, Jazh. Much appreciated, Sue