CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from WordPainter
This haiku is excellent. I love it. Past, present, and future all three in one quick glimpse. And the progression...memories, permeating, molding. Perfect 5-7-5, good job!
Lois
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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This haiku is excellent. I love it. Past, present, and future all three in one quick glimpse. And the progression...memories, permeating, molding. Perfect 5-7-5, good job!
Lois
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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WordPainter, was just tweaking it, as I only just posted it. Awesome! Thanks for that great review. Very much appreciated...with regards, Sue
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My pleasure! Looks like you did a good job in the tweaking.
Blessings,
Lois