CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "In Shatters"A collection of poetry
87 total reviews
Comment from Nicnac
This poem has a lovely message.
The old saying, "Sticks and stones will break my bones, but words will never hurt me..." is not true.
Words can hurt worse.
I love the way you have expressed yourself so softly, yet profoundly. No revisions.
Lovely poem.
Have a happy Thanksgiving Day!
Blessings,
~Nic
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This poem has a lovely message.
The old saying, "Sticks and stones will break my bones, but words will never hurt me..." is not true.
Words can hurt worse.
I love the way you have expressed yourself so softly, yet profoundly. No revisions.
Lovely poem.
Have a happy Thanksgiving Day!
Blessings,
~Nic
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Why, indeed. Sometimes I wonder why we cease to care about what we say. For it is not what goes in the mouth that defiles us. It is what comes out.
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Why, indeed. Sometimes I wonder why we cease to care about what we say. For it is not what goes in the mouth that defiles us. It is what comes out.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from grassroots08
Very well done. I got the feeling of the message clearly. This was well planned out and I appreciate the opportunity of reading it. Kudos to you, grassroots08.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Very well done. I got the feeling of the message clearly. This was well planned out and I appreciate the opportunity of reading it. Kudos to you, grassroots08.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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grassroots, So glad this work resonated with you. Thank you for your very specific comments and most generous review. Very much appreciated with warm regards, Sue
Comment from Oatmeal
Sixteezkid,
Words are painful. If your words cut me down the problem is that you can apologize for the stabs and remove the knives but I will remember what you said and the scar will be with me forever.
I love the theme you chose for this one. You did a wonderful job once again.
There were no errors that I could see.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Sixteezkid,
Words are painful. If your words cut me down the problem is that you can apologize for the stabs and remove the knives but I will remember what you said and the scar will be with me forever.
I love the theme you chose for this one. You did a wonderful job once again.
There were no errors that I could see.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2008
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Oatmeal, thank you for your very generous review. And for your most kind words. With my warmest regards, Sue
Comment from carolm5415
A double tetractys (I still think it's a prehistoric bird!) and it is excellent. How true it is that we can do so much harm with words. Think of the cyber bullying that is causing so much pain and even death to young people.
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A double tetractys (I still think it's a prehistoric bird!) and it is excellent. How true it is that we can do so much harm with words. Think of the cyber bullying that is causing so much pain and even death to young people.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from daysofdeath1
wow... this poem expresses such passion and emotion that it is hard to put it in words, but in that you have succeeded... bravo
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wow... this poem expresses such passion and emotion that it is hard to put it in words, but in that you have succeeded... bravo
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from nancyjam
Very strong poem. Amazing how
so few words can express such strong
emotions. Some fresh images here.
"cuts penetrate our soul down to the core
as we flinch from their sounds." good work.
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Very strong poem. Amazing how
so few words can express such strong
emotions. Some fresh images here.
"cuts penetrate our soul down to the core
as we flinch from their sounds." good work.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2008
Comment from SunlitWhisper
This is great and I adore the sound message that it spreads out to the reader. It solid and the flow is very smooth.
Nice poem IMHO.
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This is great and I adore the sound message that it spreads out to the reader. It solid and the flow is very smooth.
Nice poem IMHO.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from BillBologna
A nice poem that follow as unique format. You have done that well and it does not seemed forced by flows very naturally. Good luck.
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A nice poem that follow as unique format. You have done that well and it does not seemed forced by flows very naturally. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008
Comment from rama devi
Excellent mirror work with a strong message delivered with clarity and insight. Strong presentation with apt artwork to enhance the cutting edge tone.
Bravo and good luck in the contest.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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Excellent mirror work with a strong message delivered with clarity and insight. Strong presentation with apt artwork to enhance the cutting edge tone.
Bravo and good luck in the contest.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 26-Nov-2008