CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 146 "Warmth Lies Dormant"A collection of poetry
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Comment from CHIDOZIE
Poetry is a universal art that thrives on images, sounds, and symbols. I don't know enough Haiku to evaluate from that stand point. But as a work of art with potent images, evocative diction,and good cadence, I'm sure this poem is a success.
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Poetry is a universal art that thrives on images, sounds, and symbols. I don't know enough Haiku to evaluate from that stand point. But as a work of art with potent images, evocative diction,and good cadence, I'm sure this poem is a success.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Hurricane Dean
The title of this poem makes me think about all the little creatures that burrow in and hibernate during the cold winter days. Good imagery and message buried in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Sincerely, Dean
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The title of this poem makes me think about all the little creatures that burrow in and hibernate during the cold winter days. Good imagery and message buried in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Sincerely, Dean
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is a beautiful descriptive haiku you have done really very well with the limitations of the form well done I enjoyed good luck regards Fuller
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This is a beautiful descriptive haiku you have done really very well with the limitations of the form well done I enjoyed good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from AbigailDavid
Hello, lovely word choices and I notice this is a competition entry, so best of luck!!
I noticed no errors, and the publishing choices make this a very attractive window to open.
Bye for now, and thanks for sharing your writing, abby
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Hello, lovely word choices and I notice this is a competition entry, so best of luck!!
I noticed no errors, and the publishing choices make this a very attractive window to open.
Bye for now, and thanks for sharing your writing, abby
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from mmichelle97219
I love the cooking terminology used to describe a season. It really makes it an original work that pops. Well done.
Michelle
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I love the cooking terminology used to describe a season. It really makes it an original work that pops. Well done.
Michelle
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good evening Sixteezkid,
Great vision of the three season.
First the season of autumn being taken away for the start of winter and how we wait for new live coming from the season Spring.
Excellent haiku
Gert
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Good evening Sixteezkid,
Great vision of the three season.
First the season of autumn being taken away for the start of winter and how we wait for new live coming from the season Spring.
Excellent haiku
Gert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
::shrugs::
It's a perfectly written Haiku, near as I can tell. I don't have anything for you by way of criticism or critique.
:0)
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::shrugs::
It's a perfectly written Haiku, near as I can tell. I don't have anything for you by way of criticism or critique.
:0)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from ledford
Good job:-)
I love the word you chose ... "consuming". It does seem that way, doesn't it; the colors all of a sudden are gone.
Good luck in the contest!
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Good job:-)
I love the word you chose ... "consuming". It does seem that way, doesn't it; the colors all of a sudden are gone.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a quite lovely little haiku, Sixteezkid. Your syllable numbers are exactly right, and the poem invokes the coldness of winter beautifully.
Sally
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This is a quite lovely little haiku, Sixteezkid. Your syllable numbers are exactly right, and the poem invokes the coldness of winter beautifully.
Sally
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
Comment from jlsavell
sixteezkid, this is truly a great haiku as I believe it does meet all the requirements for a traditional haiku..wonderful write...best wishes on the contest..jlsavell
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sixteezkid, this is truly a great haiku as I believe it does meet all the requirements for a traditional haiku..wonderful write...best wishes on the contest..jlsavell
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008