~Someday~
Together Forever!57 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Bill. This is a superb love letter to your wife. The joy of the marriage and the pain of the loss as well as the anticipation of being reunited all speak in volumes here. This is exceptional writing and I express my admiration for this wonderful poem.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Hello Bill. This is a superb love letter to your wife. The joy of the marriage and the pain of the loss as well as the anticipation of being reunited all speak in volumes here. This is exceptional writing and I express my admiration for this wonderful poem.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Robert!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the six stars, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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You're welcome
Comment from kleck140
Your are well blessed with talent that can move and
stirs my heart and my soul. I am at the K-3 level here
and wish to learn how to write my bio(story) with glee.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Your are well blessed with talent that can move and
stirs my heart and my soul. I am at the K-3 level here
and wish to learn how to write my bio(story) with glee.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
Great meeting you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Lond Distance," Chapter's 1-19 may be found on Cathy's Profile page. We would be honored having you follow along. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Tootie
Hi Bill!
I say it time and time again, how very fortunate I am to have met you here and to now be co-authoring books with you! YOU ARE AMAZING! This poem contains deep feelings of everlasting love and commitment. It flows so smoothly, and the beginning of every stanza with "Someday" is perfect. Your strong and enduring love for your wife gives me (and others) hope in knowing that true love does exist! You are such an AWESOME writer and an even better man. What a wonderful Valentine's poem for your beautiful wife. She is smiling down on you from heaven and someday (no doubts about it), you will hold her in your strong arms once again. Until then, she is always with you in spirit. "You Betcha!" Your author notes are heartfelt and so very true. Yes, LOVE is the answer, so let's go "fill our pockets full!" God Bless. I wish you a much deserved win in the contest.
Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love,
Cathy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Bill!
I say it time and time again, how very fortunate I am to have met you here and to now be co-authoring books with you! YOU ARE AMAZING! This poem contains deep feelings of everlasting love and commitment. It flows so smoothly, and the beginning of every stanza with "Someday" is perfect. Your strong and enduring love for your wife gives me (and others) hope in knowing that true love does exist! You are such an AWESOME writer and an even better man. What a wonderful Valentine's poem for your beautiful wife. She is smiling down on you from heaven and someday (no doubts about it), you will hold her in your strong arms once again. Until then, she is always with you in spirit. "You Betcha!" Your author notes are heartfelt and so very true. Yes, LOVE is the answer, so let's go "fill our pockets full!" God Bless. I wish you a much deserved win in the contest.
Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love,
Cathy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Co-author!
Quite a prestigious review from an "AWESOME WRITER!" Wanna know what God told me? He said, "I almost said NO when Cathy asked to fly down and teach you to write; yet, when I read your first poem, I added an additional twenty feet to each of her wings and whispered, 'Good-luck, 'cause your gonna need it!'" A 2nd "SALUTE," and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Trainloads of Love,
Bill
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Well, God also told me you were worth the trip! I'm so glad that when you threw corn at me as I descended down to you, you finally realized I was an angel . . . and not a chicken! Shee! :) Seriously, you are the angel, and the honor is all mine! A 2nd "SALUTE" back atcha, AWESOME WRITER! Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Tankloads of Love,
Cathy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Bill, this is a lovely dedication to your wife who died in 2016. You have written several poems for her and this is yet another well written, sincere offering. It is very sad, but a lovely read and a perfect entry to the contest. I wish you luck and warm wishes. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Hello Bill, this is a lovely dedication to your wife who died in 2016. You have written several poems for her and this is yet another well written, sincere offering. It is very sad, but a lovely read and a perfect entry to the contest. I wish you luck and warm wishes. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Dorothy!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Aaqib!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Best wishes to you as well! Keep writing :-)
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A 2nd "SALUTE," my dear friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yours is a beautiful presentation, Commando. Your words are from your heart. The well-chosen words are AWESOME. Readers ( and me) can feel the love and longing for your wife in each word.
The smooth flow, the rhymes, and the great imagery are most enjoyable. I could 'see' everything you would do to honor your wife.
I would select my favorite, but then I would be copying the entire poem. I like how each verse begins with someday. I believe that ties the verses together and keeps readers focused on the true meaning of your words.
The breeze whispering "I Love You.' through the trees is an excellent image. Your art choice is perfect, too. While a bit sad, the atmosphere around the angel and what it represents holds much promise of being reunited in eternity.
Your author notes are exquisite. too. The meaning of those well-chosen words is easy to identify for each person. They speak to one's beliefs and the fact that true love never dies and you and she will be reunited forever together in Heaven.. Thanks for sharing this beautiful presentation. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Yours is a beautiful presentation, Commando. Your words are from your heart. The well-chosen words are AWESOME. Readers ( and me) can feel the love and longing for your wife in each word.
The smooth flow, the rhymes, and the great imagery are most enjoyable. I could 'see' everything you would do to honor your wife.
I would select my favorite, but then I would be copying the entire poem. I like how each verse begins with someday. I believe that ties the verses together and keeps readers focused on the true meaning of your words.
The breeze whispering "I Love You.' through the trees is an excellent image. Your art choice is perfect, too. While a bit sad, the atmosphere around the angel and what it represents holds much promise of being reunited in eternity.
Your author notes are exquisite. too. The meaning of those well-chosen words is easy to identify for each person. They speak to one's beliefs and the fact that true love never dies and you and she will be reunited forever together in Heaven.. Thanks for sharing this beautiful presentation. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Laura Jan!
Quite an astonishing review. Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to read my work. It is an honor having an "AWESOME WRITER," (YOU) to express admiration for my work. As always, best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration,
Bill
Comment from RShipp
What a grand memorial poem.
I did read you author notes... and I agree, more people should take time each day to look in the mirror and reflect on who that person truly is that is looking back at them.
Best of luck in the Valentine's Poem contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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What a grand memorial poem.
I did read you author notes... and I agree, more people should take time each day to look in the mirror and reflect on who that person truly is that is looking back at them.
Best of luck in the Valentine's Poem contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," RShipp!
It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Sally Law
It's such a pleasure to see a man who is still in love with his wife. I am sick for six today!! Please accept my five with kind compliments, Bill. This is simply outstanding. I wish you all the best for the contest.
Sally Law xo
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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It's such a pleasure to see a man who is still in love with his wife. I am sick for six today!! Please accept my five with kind compliments, Bill. This is simply outstanding. I wish you all the best for the contest.
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Sally!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Susan Larson
This is absolutely beautiful. I especially love "then forever, together, Heaven we'll explore.
Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart." What a beautiful life to look forward to.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is absolutely beautiful. I especially love "then forever, together, Heaven we'll explore.
Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart." What a beautiful life to look forward to.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Susan!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the six star review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You wrote a beautiful poem about your anticipation of being with your wife again, forever in Heaven. Along with the presentation your Author's notes just broke me up, Commando, I am crying.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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You wrote a beautiful poem about your anticipation of being with your wife again, forever in Heaven. Along with the presentation your Author's notes just broke me up, Commando, I am crying.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Raffaelina!
Great hearing from you, my dear friend. Thanks for the six star review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill