Autumn Picture Show
5-7-5 contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
A beautiful verse in simple down to earth vocabulary reflecting a serene autumn scene-picture perfect! Thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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A beautiful verse in simple down to earth vocabulary reflecting a serene autumn scene-picture perfect! Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Kamran, thank you for a great review....I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Joan E.
What a transporting, animated picture--I felt I was right there with the family enjoying the ducks and the falling leaves! How clever of you to continue the sensation with the play on "cinema" and the "last leaf"!! A clear winning entry for the 5-7-5 contest!!! Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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What a transporting, animated picture--I felt I was right there with the family enjoying the ducks and the falling leaves! How clever of you to continue the sensation with the play on "cinema" and the "last leaf"!! A clear winning entry for the 5-7-5 contest!!! Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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HI Joan, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I love the picture too...this is what it made me feel...thank you....
Comment from tfawcus
Your five-seven-five poem for the contest describes the scene in the accompanying picture, likening it to an enthralling picture show - an apt metaphor. Autumn is both a time of wonder and of reflection.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Your five-seven-five poem for the contest describes the scene in the accompanying picture, likening it to an enthralling picture show - an apt metaphor. Autumn is both a time of wonder and of reflection.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Tony, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...yes Autumn is stunning....
Comment from Dawn Munro
Doesn't it feel just like that? What a great 5-7-5 poem - I never thought of Autumn as being like cinema until I read this, and now I think that is the way I will always see it - wonderfully imaginative poetry.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Doesn't it feel just like that? What a great 5-7-5 poem - I never thought of Autumn as being like cinema until I read this, and now I think that is the way I will always see it - wonderfully imaginative poetry.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Dawn, WOW!!! what a wonderful review...I am so glad it made you feel that way...thank you so very much....
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This 5-7-5 poem tells an amazing story of Autumn. The picture accentuates your words perfectly. Well written and enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
:)Brigitte
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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This 5-7-5 poem tells an amazing story of Autumn. The picture accentuates your words perfectly. Well written and enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
:)Brigitte
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Brigitte, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture...thank you for your good luck...and Blessings to you as well...
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi Teri, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it...God Bless
Comment from frierajac
I love the presentation with the autumn leaf falling reminiscent of the old song, 'September Song' or the old standard, 'Autumn Leaves' drift by my window, (etc.)
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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I love the presentation with the autumn leaf falling reminiscent of the old song, 'September Song' or the old standard, 'Autumn Leaves' drift by my window, (etc.)
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Hi frierjac, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...and thank you for your best wishes...
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Please do keep writing.
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thank you so very much...xxoo love
Comment from mvbrooks
What a beautiful picture that fully captures the poem. The kids truly seem "amazed by the show." Makes you want to go to the window and view it yourself.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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What a beautiful picture that fully captures the poem. The kids truly seem "amazed by the show." Makes you want to go to the window and view it yourself.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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HI Maureen, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture as well...and yes they do look amazed...thank you...
Comment from Val Crisson
This is a very sweet depiction of the end of Fall, but I am not quite clear why "cinema" is highlighted in blue. My only suggestion is in this short of a piece you have too many unnecesary words. You use "the" twice and "a" and "the" - this would be a far more strong piece if you could use other stronger word of description. I hope this helps.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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This is a very sweet depiction of the end of Fall, but I am not quite clear why "cinema" is highlighted in blue. My only suggestion is in this short of a piece you have too many unnecesary words. You use "the" twice and "a" and "the" - this would be a far more strong piece if you could use other stronger word of description. I hope this helps.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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HI Val, thank you so much for a wonderful review...my cinema is in black..hmmmmm....thank you for the help
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It's actually in blue?
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I'll go check it out again...thank you...xxoo
Comment from Cedar
What a lovely 5-7-5. Autumn is such a beautiful time of the year and my favorite season. This one should do very well in the contest.
I wish you good luck mystery writer...go get em'...Bill
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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What a lovely 5-7-5. Autumn is such a beautiful time of the year and my favorite season. This one should do very well in the contest.
I wish you good luck mystery writer...go get em'...Bill
Comment Written 18-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Bill for your help...and for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...