Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Smiling --- Delightful 1-6-1 form poem for the contest. In so few words, you have created vivid imagery. The artwork enhanced that idea.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI Janet, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and Blessings to you as well...xxoo

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

I think you met the challenge quite well with this piece. That is just too funny, loved your rhymes. Perfectly illustrated, as well!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

Hi Crybry, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, well done on the 1.6.1, jump, stump and thump all good rhyme on this. good job and thought, good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI William, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...you have a great day as well...xxoo

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This is a very funny response. It follows the paradigm of the Japanese form although it isn't in the sense that it is spontaneous and except for the last syllable it is
quite intuitive.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Hi frier, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo

reply by frierajac on 08-Nov-2016

Good Luck

reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

thank you...xxoo

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

a very good 1-6-1 poem with an animation that goes so well with it. It is a normal thing to say "be careful" but they say it only hinders the person in trouble.

Well done Good luck Mary

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Hi Mary, thank you so very...so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

what an excellent 1-6-1, extremely creative and clever. A complete story within the tight constraints of the guidelines of the contest. And beautifully presented.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI lufoster, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. Jump over a stump, but be careful not to thump on your bum. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Hi Sandra, thank you so very much...so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

haha fantastic, so well formulated considering the very limited room and strict form. the picture fits the jovial theme ideally. I appreciate the chuckle.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

HI Joanna, thank you so very much...I'm so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha

What a fun poem. Good job on the style for this contest. I enjoyed reading your few words. They tell a funny little story. The picture is perfect, too.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

Hi Jan, thank you so very much, I am so glad you like it...xxoo

Comment from Quantum Traveler

Excellent

Excellent visual effect for this writing.
Good colors and animation pull it all together with just a little touch of Disney humor.
Well Done...Quantum Traveler...Phil.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

HI Phil, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...I love Goofy...one of my favorites...xxoo

reply by Quantum Traveler on 09-Nov-2016

Goofy could always make me chuckle...I liked this Posting...Q.T...Phil.

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016

thank you so much Phil...he could make me laugh...so glad you like it...have a great day...

reply by Quantum Traveler on 09-Nov-2016

Thank you...Q.T...Phil.